I'm have to write a poem, I need ur help!!?

Question

It's an about me poem
Can you fill in the dots with descriptive things, that don't describe what you are but what you could or possibly be feeling or whatever

I feel....
I touch....
I cry when....

For example
I hear.....the birds chirpping in a late August afternoon

i need actual ideas

no suggestions please

Answer 1

I FEEL:

sad when you are not with me
happy when I am on my own
you near me even though you are far away
the breeze on my face
excitement as I race down the hill
the sun as it kisses myfaces gently
the crunch of crystals under my feet (frost)
lost as I watch you walk away
the sweat dripping from my face

I TOUCH
the fairies wings with timid fingertips
the hearts of many with the words I write
the gentle velvet of your skin
the stars with outstretched fingers
the bars of my cage and stare out at the sea of faces
your heart with thoughts of love
her hair with tenderness winding the tresses in my fingers

I CRY WHEN...
I see your pain
I remember your touch
the waves recede in my thoughts and I see...
the first sounds of spring reach my ears
the enormity of your love touches me
I think of the loss

I hope these help a bit....

Answer 2

Sure, I'd love to help you! I am very poetic but it is always either a looong process or an instantaneous gift. This is gonna be fun! Here goes:

I feel capable of flying but unable to find my launch pad

I touch my dream but time takes me wakes me and shakes me back into a limited reality

I cry when confusion clouds my visions but rejoice with every new chance for change

OR

I feel the prickly heat send sweat trickling down my neck
I touch my moistened tank knowing I should seek shade
I cry when the sun retreats into the horizon. it is time to go home

Answer 3

This assignment requires that you be honest- which is why none of the people answering this question can help you. It is not necessary however that you be rip- your -skin -off -honest. If you want an example of that idea get the lyrics to Mother by John Lennon. No , all you have to be is honest enough to get the job done while maintaining your dignity.

Answer 4

try to get a picture or a story in your head and describe what you feel hear see as if you are watching a movie of it.
....if you're at the beach:
i feel the warm sand between my toes
and the sun bouncing off my skin
i hear the whisper of the waves as they... etc etc
and so on.....hey c'mon...your teacher couldn't have made it easier for you get a grip and start doin your own homework!!!

Answer 5

If this is a poem about you, you are the only one that can write it. Ask your friends or family for help, not strangers on Yahoo Answers.
Good luck.

Answer 6

i feel the breeze in my face i touch my skin i cry when i think of you

Answer 7

they dont have to be actual things
i.e.i feel sorrow wrapping its arms around me
have fun with it!!
^_^

Answer 8

Since your using the word "I" it should all come from you. Come on - don't be lazy!