When were apart
It's you I miss
and count the days
to taste your kiss
You cannot help
but make my heart beat
and with out you
I'm incomplete
I cherish all of
your laughs and smiles
For you I'd journey
a thousand miles
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2006-08-01 09:07:17 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Beauty & Style ➔ Other - Beauty & Style
Aww.. All the other gals said it was sweet... So let me say it was delicious!!! Yummy... Are you feeling a bit depress or saddened because you and your partner is no longer together? Love doesn't hurt... It only does because we let it hurt us.
2006-08-01 09:36:29 · answer #1 · answered by Azn-lady 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
That is beautiful, oh to be young and in love, I will always be a hopeless romantic. Thank you for making the world a little more beautiful with your words.
2006-08-01 09:16:32 · answer #2 · answered by Katrina Y 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I love that poem but don't want to talk because I'm in love.
2006-08-01 09:15:40 · answer #3 · answered by amylr620 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
woow, that's the best poem i ever read written by a guy. you sure have a way with words. the poem's really sweet. i like it. it took my breathe away. lol
2006-08-01 09:11:33 · answer #4 · answered by sugar n' spice 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Nice poem. Have you tried songwriting at all? You may have the talent for it.
2006-08-01 09:12:23 · answer #5 · answered by IthinkFramptonisstillahottie 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
wow...amazing job
that'd make every guy's mouth water....
I'd like to have a talent like urs!
gd luck with the poems
hehe
:)
2006-08-01 09:14:15 · answer #6 · answered by GucciEnvyMe 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
how many times are going to post the same thing??
2006-08-01 09:13:14 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
its a very good poem, i like it very much. keep it up. gud luck
2006-08-01 09:14:58 · answer #8 · answered by sj 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
OMG! thats so sweet!
2006-08-01 09:13:35 · answer #9 · answered by mary 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
awwwwwww sooooooooo sweeeeeeeeeeeett!!!!!!!!!!
2006-08-01 09:13:16 · answer #10 · answered by Khadijah 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋