Okeys. It's too long to post here, so I'll have to give you the link to it. >.>
http://dnangel.conforums.com/index.cgi?board=general&action=display&num=1154448823
2006-08-01 05:32:52 · 18 answers · asked by kourinsuke09 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
very nice
2006-08-01 05:37:07 · answer #1 · answered by Rim 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it, you are not very mysterious as to what is wrong which sometimes makes a poem more interesting. Poetry is about interpretations and your poem leaves little room for that. But i like it it is straight forward an dthe little imagry you do have is good. Well done and i am sorry about your loss
2006-08-01 05:44:58 · answer #2 · answered by lucy_goose 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's so beautiful! You have a wonderful gift!! I know what you're talking about, because I lost my grandpa and grandma. Don't ever stop writing, because someone with so much talent can only get better and better!
2006-08-01 05:39:04 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I really liked it- I lost my grandpa 5 years ago to cancer in August - so i really understand where your coming from and the pain from losing someone.
2006-08-01 05:38:14 · answer #4 · answered by Tracey 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very impressive!
If you don't already know about this site, go here
and register and then post your poem(s) for all to
see, enjoy and critique.
http://poetry.com/
Good luck and keep up the good work!
2006-08-01 05:41:29 · answer #5 · answered by GeneL 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
A lot of feeling. I think it was wonderful.
2006-08-01 05:37:23 · answer #6 · answered by goodbye 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
WOW! WOW! WOW! Keep writing. You have lots of talent. LOVE IT!!!
2006-08-01 05:39:21 · answer #7 · answered by Elaina 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's beautiful and sad.
2006-08-01 05:38:21 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Breath again ; touchy one .
2006-08-01 05:42:43 · answer #9 · answered by deepak57 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
dam* good / don' t stop expressing yourself you have a gift.
2006-08-01 05:38:21 · answer #10 · answered by southforty1961 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋