My first real partner Dad1 although he didn't father anything and never will now, has replied to my note about his part in my semi autobiographical novel saying now he's got his permanent partner Adrian, could I not mention our time together as Adrian doesn't know he's bi. That's six chapters including all the sacrifices I made while he was starting out acting (Resting) and his discovery that I was the wrong sex for him and our Relate sessions and his being rescued from me by his mother. He's definitely not bi, it was my fault- I've always liked sensitive men and overwhelmed him, I think.
IThis really gets the book off and draws the reader in. You were. weren't you?
2006-08-01 05:29:13 · 21 answers · asked by Harriet 5 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
Its total utter rubbish your joking surely your joking, and all those people who said they liked it are lying to spare your feelings.
2006-08-01 05:58:05 · answer #1 · answered by BUNKUM! 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
So the book is set during the Second World War in Occupied France, right?
2006-08-01 12:35:37 · answer #2 · answered by zoomjet 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I kinda have to go with the previous writer above me on this one.
This is all a little too odd. Are you asking us to review your synopsis?
It just gives you more grist to your writing mill, but not really relevant on here.
And if your question is an indication of your writing style... you've some way to go before drawing people in...
2006-08-01 13:05:11 · answer #3 · answered by Colin A 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its sounds very interesting and you were right, I was drawn. And its not fair that he's asking you to remove parts of your book because he didn't tell the truth to his current partner. Hey, there may be a "fictional" story if you follow that line...
2006-08-01 12:36:25 · answer #4 · answered by Philana 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i truly hope you are hanging your head in both shame and embarrassment, it's a travesty of a sham, a white elephant, a non starter, don't give up the day job etc etc so on and so forth, but quite apart from that i'm gagging to know when the books out so i can order my advance copy from waterstones, as if!!!!!!! to be truthfull i'm embarrassed for you love
2006-08-01 12:47:25 · answer #5 · answered by Troubled Joe(the ghost of) 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Are you mental? Nobody in their right mind would pay to read that pretentious cack.
Its called Yahoo Answers not Yahoo wannabe novelist weirdo bullshit.
How is this remotely relevant a) to this site b) to the world in general??
2006-08-01 12:39:55 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It might seem like a great idea for a story, but if you go ahead with it it will impact on your personal life in a negative way. I'd think carefully first.
2006-08-02 08:01:06 · answer #7 · answered by Orla C 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yeah, I was sucked in - and probbaly so were all those characters (ok - sick pun intended). I loved the dry humour, too - "didn't father anything and never will now". Sadly, I relate to your experience, LOL
2006-08-02 07:57:56 · answer #8 · answered by xanthe b 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Doesnt make sense, wouldnt you just change the names in the book for privacy reasons as authors usually do?
2006-08-01 12:37:53 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
harriett, harriett, harriet, so bright, so nuanced , so je ne sais quoi. drawn in is a pale reflection of my surging urge to read nonstop the entire oeuvre. i can hardly wait for its publication. bon chance
2006-08-01 14:22:03 · answer #10 · answered by drakke1 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋