I closed the 'Did anyone' poem without realising that it would close so if anyone has feedback on that please post it here as well as opinions on this one.
Ice Princess
Ice Princess
You're so cold
I try to reach out
But I can't hold
Ice Princess
With your cold blue eyes
Your beauty is frozen
And it tells me lies
Ice Princess
You sit on your throne
Wearing your crown
All alone
Ice Princess
Do you know who you are?
You wear those gowns
But you won't get far
Ice Princess
What do you see?
I may not be royalty
But at least I'm happy
2006-07-31 20:09:31 · 16 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Other - Entertainment
Sounds like a beautiful girl to look at that maybe has been turned emotionless somewhere in her life due to deep sadness, the loss has been so great that it stole away her ability to feel and her status in life and beauty is not enough to make her smile. And though you try to reach her she is out of your grasp.
Maybe your conclusion is that the most important thing is surely being happy.
It is very deep, like the study of a person beyond a glance you might give on the street which is most interesting, if we were to reflect on any one person we might find that each one has their own story.
2006-07-31 20:25:47 · answer #1 · answered by Sam k 4 · 0⤊ 2⤋
I like what uni-brow said about it being about some popular girl. The popular girls hardly ever do as well as the unpopular ones lin the long run!
2006-07-31 20:26:16 · answer #2 · answered by ehc11 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
quite good but who is the ice princess
if i knew that i think i would like the poem better
any chance af adding a verse or two to explain who she is
2006-07-31 20:32:38 · answer #3 · answered by mumoftheyear 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Too depressing, find an Island girl.
2006-07-31 20:17:14 · answer #4 · answered by Scape Goat 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it :) kinda talking about some popular girl, saying u might be popular but u have no life, very deep. d**m i wish i could write like that
2006-07-31 20:15:03 · answer #5 · answered by Uni-brow 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it, i love poetry and it always mean more if its based on your on interpretation of an event or happening.
2006-07-31 22:12:55 · answer #6 · answered by princess tinkle UK 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Think it's quite amateur but well done for giving it a go. Practise makes perfect.
2006-07-31 20:17:50 · answer #7 · answered by Gypsie 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's a freeze cold poem ;)
2006-07-31 20:14:04 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Try this on for size: "People who live in glass houses, should'nt stow thrones."
2006-07-31 20:20:47 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
You're stoned cold love!
2006-08-01 04:29:31 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋