If you have time, also check out my other 2...please comment on all 3 if you can, thank you so much!
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=Au2NX8YswlpvDAon_k7ivAvsy6IX?qid=20060731054706AA0q1S7
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=ArFCx7bcmX25QnIvwWjWetzsy6IX?qid=20060731062533AAJtsOu
I know you’re sad, and it must be hard,
But don’t blame god and put up your guard,
It’s all for a reason that he chose you,
You’re the strongest, and I know that too.
He did this not for you to grieve,
But to make you stronger and help you believe
You’ve lost enough, don’t give up faith,
Turn your pain into love, not hate.
Don’t seek revenge, he’s on your side,
God can help, don’t run and hide,
Everything that’s happened, he did it for you,
Remember your faith in everything you do.
Make a pact to love him more,
Believe in him, open the door,
Put your faith in god, and your trust in me,
Keep on smiling and blessed be.
2006-07-31 10:02:58 · 15 answers · asked by ugh 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Other - Entertainment
I don't know why but I was envisioning your poem as a rap song, I even had the melody in my head! I like this one the best of the 3, You obviously are a deep thinker, good luck and keep it up!!!
2006-07-31 10:10:21 · answer #1 · answered by Silva 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I really like that poem, what do you think about this ending?
Make a pact to love him more,
Believe in him, open the door,
Put your faith in god, and your trust in me,
Keep on smiling and blessed you shall be.
2006-07-31 17:29:47 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hellos Charmed and Dangerous.
You're a very creative and original poet.
(even your Yahoo ID is creative)
I wonder what was your muse or inspiration for this? I will check the other ones too.
For sure you could win some prizes with this if you ever wanted to.
Anyway thanks for sharing with us in yahoo answers.
by the way...will u pleez pik this answer as the best. U R sweet if u do! thin~Q vry mch!
2006-07-31 17:10:20 · answer #3 · answered by whoopswhatever 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Awsome
2006-07-31 17:06:50 · answer #4 · answered by Panic at the Disco GURL 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This could restore someone's faith in God and I like that.
2006-08-01 02:58:24 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it. It's uplifting. Everyone goes thru hard times and shouldn't give up on God.
:) Bless ya!
2006-07-31 17:06:46 · answer #6 · answered by ☼ lovethesun11 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think its really beautiful. It gives hope to someone who has had tragedy in their life and would make them stronger to continue on.
2006-07-31 17:06:21 · answer #7 · answered by jr90292 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very nice...thank you for sharing it. It's nice to see other Christians posting on here.
Keep on writing.
2006-07-31 17:10:22 · answer #8 · answered by Tav I 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your poems are very good, but unless I didn't see it the poems don;t have names. Like "The Raven". I really liked them all thanks for sharing.ak
2006-07-31 17:12:48 · answer #9 · answered by auntkarendjjb 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
dew is misty; rain is wetter. ur poem is cute, but could b better.
2006-07-31 17:06:50 · answer #10 · answered by big foot 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋