this poem is called:Handicap People-
What are your limitations?
I do not know
Can you do this?
I do not know
Can you not do this?
I do not know
What is your reality?
I do not know
Can I touch you?
Yes
Can I be your friend?
Yes
Can I love you?
Yes
Can you love me?
Yes
Are you independent?
As much as I can
How much can you do?
As much as I can
How much love do you want?
As much as I can
How much love can you give?
As much as I can
Do you want pity?
No
Do you need pity?
No
Do you enjoy pity?
No
Do you pity others?
No
2006-07-31 09:34:54 · 49 answers · asked by Paul C 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
11+ I luv it.. it's moving.. touching.... to sum it up... WOW.
2006-07-31 09:36:43 · answer #1 · answered by Paru 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
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2006-07-31 09:37:36 · answer #2 · answered by singingbuggmann 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2006-07-31 09:36:10 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2006-07-31 09:36:04 · answer #4 · answered by Troy S 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2006-07-31 09:37:40 · answer #5 · answered by Jubei 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2006-07-31 09:38:32 · answer #6 · answered by bianca 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice round number of Pi.
There really wasn't much structure to it, nor does it seem that original. kinda tripe-ish.
How much love do you want?
As much as I can. ?
That really doesn't sound clear or concise. Maybe if you finshed the sentence, like can be, or can get or can give. Verbage is good.
Nor the pity part really isn't necessary, as that seems like it was written to defend itself. If the poem was written better, the last 4 question would have been answered wouldout needing it to be answered.
I'm not trying to tear this down, I'm trying to give constructive criticism.
2006-07-31 09:42:44 · answer #7 · answered by jlrgds 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Brilliant
2006-07-31 09:36:16 · answer #8 · answered by abehagenston 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
2/10
Does you have a plot?
No I don't
Are you deep in any way?
No I'm not
Are you easily imitated?
Yes I am
Are to to long?
Yes I am
Is there any reason I should like you?
No, I'm pretty worthless.
Should I give you 2pt just for trying?
Yes, why not.
You could write better poems by copying the names of random book titles in the library.
2006-07-31 09:43:23 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
You plagiarist, I wrote that:9-1/2
2006-07-31 09:38:58 · answer #10 · answered by airpolicejohn 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ummmmmmmm
Undecided
It has some good points though
.My son is in wheel chair for the rest of his life
He is not handicapped just vertically challenged.
He like others in this situation should not be labelled.
These people have feelings and brains too.
You have a disability but are not Handicapped
2006-07-31 09:44:31 · answer #11 · answered by witchfromoz2003 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋