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god=dog; sirius; dogon; nommos; anunaki; nephilim
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just because i know about the golden mean, doesn't mean you have to be mean
2006-07-31 07:09:56 · 15 answers · asked by list 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
I am so freak-in confused right now swear on my life!!!!!!! What is this. It's sounds interesting but I'm lost in space like the twilight zone for real, for real!!!!!!! Add details on what this means please.
2006-07-31 07:15:30 · answer #1 · answered by mieka_brat 2 · 0⤊ 4⤋
Seems like you're trying too hard. Focus more on your emotions. Passion is the answer, even if it is passion about nothingness... (not that you wish to put forth anything about nothing)
Poetry must jive with the poet. Have you given this piece an honest critique?
2006-07-31 07:16:54 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Some of it makes sence. But it just mostly seems like a jumble of words in a randomized order.
I'm not saying it has to rhyme or follow and order.
Jumbled words don't form poetry i'm sry.
2006-07-31 07:16:41 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
With the greatest respect, your 'effort' can be comfortably compared with other aspects of Art. It is to poetry as Modern Art is to the likes of Van Gogh or Constable.
2006-07-31 07:25:22 · answer #4 · answered by thomasrobinsonantonio 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It seems like nonsense to me. I don't care for it. The last two lines are very badly worded and too much of a cliche for modern poerty in my opinion. Your writing seems harsh and too emotional. It does not flow well.
2006-07-31 07:13:20 · answer #5 · answered by onejazzyjul 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Too abstract. Doesn't make sense. And as the Sumerian here, I can tell you that the anunnaki has nothing to do with everything else on your list.
2006-07-31 07:14:38 · answer #6 · answered by ninusharra 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
too earnestly obscure
(s/b eas eht fo woc)
2006-07-31 07:19:00 · answer #7 · answered by kerangoumar 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
At what age did you expereince blunt force trauma to the brain?
2006-07-31 07:12:17 · answer #8 · answered by JeffyB 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its sounds interesting but you shouldnt worry about people being mean to you because then you let them change you then you are not you but a version of them?
2006-07-31 07:17:16 · answer #9 · answered by self0dest0 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow, that makes absolutely no sense at all.
2006-07-31 07:13:27 · answer #10 · answered by Ember 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
to existential. Try writing about your feelings instead.
2006-07-31 07:12:38 · answer #11 · answered by proffalken1975 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋