You are great
Over fields of silk
Eyes brilliant as the eastern lights
Beatiful weaknesses, glares of might
Over fields of desert
Smooth, barren if not for my touch
Warm soft as the blood, towards the surface in a rush
Over fields of gossamer
Hidden jewels of exquisite taste
Bountiful springs found, if you know the right place
Over fields of love
You are great, you are great,
You are great Woman
By J.C. Horton
July 2006
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2006-07-31 06:28:54 · 6 answers · asked by Atypical Marvel 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Other - Family & Relationships
At first I thought it was an homage to Silken Tofu or Soy Milk. The tone is sensuous; however it needs more clarification.J.C., you need to utilize the spell check and use better English grammar. Keep at it because you do create some good word pictures.
2006-07-31 06:39:42 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 5⤊ 0⤋
Da Hamsta likes da poem!!!!!!its greatâ¥â¥â¥
2006-07-31 13:33:05 · answer #2 · answered by Jenna A☻♥ 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds great . full of nature
2006-07-31 13:31:45 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its pretty good you have alot of talent
2006-07-31 13:31:28 · answer #4 · answered by rockandroll5556 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think your in love. why? the words in your poem.
2006-07-31 13:32:49 · answer #5 · answered by <3 sarah <3 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
good imagry. it sounds like you want to get in her pants.
2006-07-31 13:33:07 · answer #6 · answered by just another consciousness 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋