Would you give me your opinion?

Question

Just go this site and listen to this song. I want critique, not insults, okay?

Thanks so much Breezy for listening. You know, I have a pretty cool sound card (Creative Soundblaster) but the site itself won't let me speed it up. Thanks so much for listening. Hey, would you check out Kiss Me? That one is faster I think. Big smiles for miles :) Sheri

Answer 1

The words are o.k., but the way it's sung puts people to sleep. Maybe u should speed it up a little to draw more attention. I'm not sayin rockstar fast, but so people will want to here it more.