Feelings
I only want to love you
And give you all of my Heart
I know you’re out there somewhere
But don't know why were Apart
I'll give you my Life
All that l have to give
I wish l knew the answer-
On where it is you live
I wish you knew the Feelings
My heart has just for You
It hurts to know you’re out there
And there’s nothing l can Do
I see us in my Dreams
But you never have a Face
So how am l to find you?
When l search from place to Place
I wonder if you’re hurting
And if you feel the Pain
From the love you've never gotten
By the person that still remains
My dreams of you are real
And times when l awake in Tears
Because the dreams l have of you
Bring you nothing-but love and Cheer
But the one that l dream the most
Is when l think of us and Cry
For all the love that l have for you
Will go with me,( Alone) the day that l DIE
By Cobra
2006-07-30 12:15:52 · 34 answers · asked by Cobra 5 in Family & Relationships ➔ Marriage & Divorce
Don't listen to all of these negative people! I think your poem is very touching. I hope you find someone to share your "FEELINGS" with.
PS There is nothing wrong with James Blunt!!!!!!!
2006-07-30 12:24:12 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
if you're looking for an opinion on the poem here it is. It's alright, a bit intense i think you can say the same thing but condense it a little some of the lines are overdone and unnecessary. Also you don't need to capitalize every line and you need to work on the punctuation. the last line should be will go with me, alone, until the day i die.
you capitalize words in the sentences that do not need capitalization and if you broke it up into stanza's it would flow better.
I say give it to the girl it's meant for and then move on.
2006-07-30 12:22:27 · answer #2 · answered by christina s 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Cobra that is a very sweet poem.and I can tell it came from the heart.But shouldn't you share that with a girlfriend.that you love the most.and not with about a thousand other girls that are going to read you're question.keep in mind that there are alot of girls on this site that will read ur poem.Good luck
2006-07-30 12:24:05 · answer #3 · answered by Angel sent from heaven 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That was deep. you must be very sensitive. And not just sensitive to your own feelings but the feeling's of other people who surround you in day to day life. All I can say is never stop writing. Poetry seems to be apart of you, apart of who you are. If you stop writing a piece of you will die, a big part of your soul will die and if that happens it will feel like you have lost your best friend. keep writing and never stop. trust me.
2006-07-30 12:23:43 · answer #4 · answered by firefly_pl 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very romantic poem, hope you find your special someone. Love is wonderful with the right person.
2006-07-30 12:21:06 · answer #5 · answered by memeemelissa 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice poem,get off the rocker and go rocking or bowling or skating or to the library or the park
2006-07-30 12:30:36 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
That was deep... something like that could only have come from someone named Cobra.
2006-07-30 12:19:04 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Dear Cobra:
You need to share that with the one that you truly love, not every woman that reads your question or lack of question.
beautful-but sad.
2006-07-30 12:18:47 · answer #8 · answered by lostlamb007 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Whats hilarious is the fact that you put this in marriage and divorce
2006-07-30 12:19:21 · answer #9 · answered by SunnySmile83 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
when are guys gunna understand that to "todays woman" poetry is boring and akward. write her a punk rock song!
2006-07-30 12:19:07 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋