*Rose From a Thorn*
Many hardships and sufferings occur
Everything beautiful is just a big blurr
Pain pierces from a sharp cutting thorn
And All you can do is cry and mourn
Trials devour you, and there is no end
You feel like you have not a friend
All you can think about is searing pain
Forgetting God's powerful healing name
God watches you go through severity
He wants us to see his blessings with clarity
Call to him and he will make a way
Through the pitch black darkness of today
Out of the thorn will bloom a red rose
All of its wonderous beauty will be exposed
Maturity and love will blossom and grow
God's perfect will and purpose you'll know
What is a beautiful rose without a thorn?
For it makes the rose's beauty reborn
What is a life without trials to endure?
It will create a thankful heart so pure
2006-07-30 01:29:13 · 19 answers · asked by OnFireForJesus! 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Philosophy
NOW THAT'S WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUT PEOPLE!! everyone who says read my poem always sucks at poetry nothing ryhmes and they talk about nothing, but yours is perfect!! very good i've been writing poems since i was 16 i love it!! now i'm 27.
2006-07-30 01:34:05 · answer #1 · answered by ? 3 · 3⤊ 0⤋
Yes a rose is pretty but them thorns are ruff. This goes for life. Life is nice but, due to the fact that satan came into this world, it's tuff. So one day if we wait soon enough God will keep all the roses but take away the thorns.Case over with, Next.
2006-07-30 04:41:28 · answer #2 · answered by SecretUser 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow!
That is not a question! More of a statement!
Here you are on the Internet, I'll bet you have air conditioning, and you have plenty of food! You have a car, and a TV, maybe even cable. You should speak of hardships?
We all have hardships, but compared to the Majority of the word we have life easy! Get off you high horse. Damn I have a problem with people who are so wrapped up in themselves that they can't see the word!
2006-07-30 01:36:39 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
What's a Snickers bar without the peanuts?
What's an Almond Joy without the coconut?
What's a Big Mac without the ground beef?
Life is just a series of questions...
2006-07-30 02:03:16 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is a species of the rose that do not have thorns. Too long to read the rest.
2006-07-30 03:40:19 · answer #5 · answered by daljack -a girl 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
First of all, nice poem. I actually forwarded it to a friend. Thank you.
Second, as they say, a little suffering is good for the soul. Without pain, you can't appreciate pleasure or the absence of pain. No pain, no gain. Okay, enough of the cliches. You get the picture.
2006-07-30 07:13:39 · answer #6 · answered by 3kewenay3 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow, thats amazing. I've written on this frequently but rarely such an eloquent way of putting the question.
It captures the quote i wrote not long ago perfectly in prose form;
"When there is no peril in the fight, there is no glory in the triumph".
This poem is as yet the highlight of my day.
Thanks.
2006-07-30 01:34:22 · answer #7 · answered by zephyrescent 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Troubles in life makes u more experienced and if u cry seeing a storm u r a coward . Face the world .
2006-07-30 02:18:27 · answer #8 · answered by lin 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
A rose without a thorn is a dead rose...a life without trouble is a dead body. True.
2006-07-30 01:33:13 · answer #9 · answered by 4999_Basque 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The truth is that trouble in life makes one stronger so that when you supposably resurrect from the grave at christ's second coming, you won't ever fall into sin....I think
2006-07-30 01:32:00 · answer #10 · answered by Cyber 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋