It's something I wrote tell me what you think. I was bored so I wrote this. It has no meaning to me so say what you think.
I’ve fallen in love with you and I just cant seem to tell you how I feel am I a coward or am I afraid of what you will say to me after I tell you how I feel. Why must it be so hard to say that I love you? I will say how I feel. “Excuse me may I talk to you” “What” was all he said “Um…. Never mind” and I walked away.
I left the boy who had my heart but my heart no longer was alive it now was dead. Do to the fact that he didn’t want to talk to me. He was so rude to me and I dint even do anything to him why must I go through this hurt for a stupid boy.
2006-07-29 07:00:02 · 17 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
i think it was pretty good. yep keep writing and then you can make totally awesome! poems or whatever that was cuz that was pretty good!!!
2006-07-29 07:03:51 · answer #1 · answered by I Luv Joel Madden!! 6 · 1⤊ 2⤋
I’ve fallen in love with you and I just cant seem to tell you how I feel. I feel like a coward and I am afraid of what you will say to me; after I tell you how I feel. Why must it be so hard to say that I love you? I will say how I feel. “Excuse me, may I talk to you?” “What?” was what he said. “Um…. Never mind,” and I walked away.
I left the boy who had my heart. My heart no longer feels alive. It has deadened my heart; and left me feeling numb. It hurt me when he didn’t want to talk to me. He was very rude to me and I never did anything to him. Why do I hurt over a stupid boy?
You feel very rejected...and of course, it hurts...but I urge you to remember it isn't personal...he doesn't even know you. Tell yourself it is his loss, not yours. He apparently wasn't worth your time and effort. There will be other boys, Hon. I am glad you found out before you told him. I loved your letter; and I made a few improvements in it for you. I hope you like it. You might want to save it for someone more deserving.
2006-07-29 07:13:18 · answer #2 · answered by riverhawthorne 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not bad at all girl. Keep going
2006-07-29 07:04:30 · answer #3 · answered by E.B. 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds stupid and cliché.
2006-07-29 07:03:45 · answer #4 · answered by Forest_aude 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Keep writing. You have a talent.
2006-07-29 07:03:38 · answer #5 · answered by Missy 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very nice and poetic
2006-07-29 07:03:07 · answer #6 · answered by Grown Man 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That was really good!! I would like to see more
2006-07-29 07:03:28 · answer #7 · answered by mrshunter_2002 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's OK.
And to answer the question in the poem we are just human.
2006-07-29 07:07:07 · answer #8 · answered by raven 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Pretty darn good.
2006-07-29 07:06:31 · answer #9 · answered by Nece 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
k
2006-07-29 07:03:13 · answer #10 · answered by sleddinginthesnow 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋