When i look in her eyes i know im in love love she's probaly breaks my heart who cares im in love im in love im in love while im in my room i think about her because im in love she gots broken hearts all the time i wont break her heart because im in love im in love love im in love I probaly won't won't buy her expensive stuff like a diamod ring and take her out to dinner then she might hate me who cares im in love im in love im in love im in love im in love becuase im in love
2006-07-29 03:40:26 · 11 answers · asked by tylergravelle@myspace.com 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
Aww it's sweet.
2006-07-29 03:44:54 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
ummmm.. It might help hearing it in music. Lyrics are ok. Needs a little more to it than just im in love. You wont buy her expensive stuff / diamond ring and no dinner. cheapie. You wont get the girl that way.. lol
2006-07-29 10:44:25 · answer #2 · answered by yournotalone 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Do you know why you love this girl? Then tell us those reasons in your song. It would be far more interesting to us than hearing you say over and over that you love her. Tell us WHY you lover her. Describe her, give us a peak at the inner and outer beauty that drew you to her. Okay?
2006-07-29 10:48:11 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
hey that's great! i'd give that 12/10. but just take out some im in love cuz they're too much and just ruin the song...poem...thingy. yeah, so take my advice and do it
2006-07-29 10:47:09 · answer #4 · answered by Alucard 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You say "I'm in love" too much, you need more in your song, but this piece would work well if it were shortened and turned into the chorus.
2006-07-29 10:44:13 · answer #5 · answered by Kiki Joy 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Erm Nice, Yea very romantic lol.
2006-07-29 10:43:31 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
too many i in love good as a peom
2006-07-29 10:43:42 · answer #7 · answered by speedoh 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Tyler, To you it is probably the greatest song ever written. Personally, I do not agree. Sorry............... but keep trying......
2006-07-29 10:46:55 · answer #8 · answered by thomasrobinsonantonio 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
id have to hear the tune
2006-07-29 10:45:13 · answer #9 · answered by rockstar101 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sang good buddy
2006-07-29 10:43:48 · answer #10 · answered by martin s 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋