it someone coming to my face they in ma way i say move but i blocked anywayz
they ridin clean on 26'zz candypaint too
we drive real slow i got alot of dough fo real no
heck yes my teeth diamondz SHINE smile i make everyone blind just like me chillin Malibu with Mary J blige
i don't know who ? im talkin about 2005 2006 i forgot yeah Lean Back !
ok so they tell me whena go please i go whenva snap my fingerz to beat hol up lost the beat! man
everybody thinkz they know me like that please touching my shoulder im santizer homie get yo bacteria off me cuz you don't know me like that
yeah im chillin with peeps t pain,50 cent who who Ne Yo too yeah right they peeps please!
walk out salon please girl aproach cat fight please i got my hair did and my nailz errabody in da hood know me thay sista!
i ain't Hilary Duff,Britney ,Ashley please im sick of those sick! step off back away from homie!
learn it love it get out of my way !
Rahh!
2006-07-29 02:56:39 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
it's aight but it isn't set up like a real rap song. what's the chorus is.
2006-07-29 03:00:51 · answer #1 · answered by tsoddy2013 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
There's no continuity. There's no refrain. If I were to name the song I would call it "Bull Rap". Songs, even rap, need to tell a story from start to finish, not just be a collection of unrelated semi-rhymed statements. Go back to work on it, make it mean something, come up with a catchy refrain or background line. Good luck, work on it.
2006-07-29 03:05:21 · answer #2 · answered by sparkletina 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Can't argue with you there. Yes it is horrible
2006-07-29 03:18:26 · answer #3 · answered by guitardan 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
umm...pardon me?
(thought this was site only for English speakers!)
2006-07-29 03:07:33 · answer #4 · answered by cymbalita 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋