pls be serious
baby, oh baby (it's not like baby oh baby, but held a while bayaayayaby)
repeat
repeat again
(just 3 times)
then:
oh, yeah, oh yeah, oh pretty baby (kind of screaming, but not like slipknot, more like james brown meets korn)
and then:
oh, bbbbbbbaby bbbaby bbbaby (like stuttering on BTO's you ain't seen nothin' yet, or the who on my generation)
and then:
you know baby (scream a little) you know you don't know how much i love you (lo-ove you, with 2 syllables, really fast)
and next:
go back to beginning and repeat 4 times
2006-07-29 01:04:23 · 10 answers · asked by bakbiter 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
oops, i forgot, there's like a 20 minute guitar solo right after the 3rd oh baby, the 3rd time through. it goes like van halen influenced by jimi hendrix with overtones of buck dharma (c'mon, he's awesome, from blue oyster cult) and shades of alvin lee (10 years after, anyone?)
2006-07-29 01:07:05 · update #1
actually there are thousands of songs that have repetitive lyrics, and half of them only 7 or less words! you act like you know what you're talking about, do some research for crying out loud
(that gives me inspiration for a new song.....
for crying out loud (like janis joplin, with the smashing pumpkins backing her up.............
2006-07-29 01:14:48 · update #2
Sounds abit like Babe I'm Gonna Leave You by Led Zeppelin, which is excellent.
2006-07-29 01:11:27 · answer #1 · answered by Stefano 3 · 4⤊ 1⤋
I'm gonna have to agree w/ everyone else, in that's there's too few lyrics. BUT NEVER GIVE UP!!! It's a great start, and writing lyrics, and instrumental parts is a complicated process. Use that as a starting point, find some inspirations, and build off of it. Don't ever let people's opinions put u down. One person may hate what another may love. I think u've got the motivation, so work hard, and rock on!
2006-07-29 13:30:36 · answer #2 · answered by C O 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'd prbably like the music and not listen to the words. That's the way I usually listen to music.
Music 1st, if I like it, then I'll get into the words later. If you got a little bit of Van Halen and Jimi Hendrix in there I'll like it.
So far so good - now put that in an MP3 and send me a link to D/L it and I'll have a listen.
2006-07-29 08:12:44 · answer #3 · answered by hellcat1st 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's a whole lot repetitious, it doesn't matter how many different ways you say it, it's too few words.
Edit...
You asked for a serious opinion and then tell us we don't know what we're talking about, all I can say now is...thanks for 2 points...baby, baby, baby!
2006-07-29 08:08:54 · answer #4 · answered by Rick H 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Think you need to think up some better lyrics than oh baby. In fact you need to think up alot more lyrics.
2006-07-29 08:11:54 · answer #5 · answered by guitardan 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
4 lines of the same lyrics, dosnt make a a gold record!
2006-07-29 08:09:28 · answer #6 · answered by close_my_eyes2002 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its ok for a loser thinks for 2 points
2006-07-29 10:36:39 · answer #7 · answered by tylergravelle@myspace.com 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's rubbish
What is it you are trying to say?
2006-07-29 08:08:56 · answer #8 · answered by ssuperpete 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
too many babies
2006-07-29 08:15:22 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It was like................"DOH!"
2006-07-29 08:09:04 · answer #10 · answered by akar 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋