Song:Picture
Artist:Bullet proof
Album:(Not yet..!)
"Picture me inside the mysrey of pain where all dem ****** gettin killed due 2 black 2 black crimes.Yo why we shouldn't blame our self first and stop those crimes and live like true brothaz.The ghetto iz a ***** trap ***** don't u fall on it..as soon as u do ur dirt here comes the police..
Yo why i got beef with the police ain't that a *****..i wouldnt rest in peace until u dirty muthafuckaz stop ****** with our brothaz as soon as u leave us..we shall be able 2 solve and stop our own problemz..ain't we brothaz ?
I knever thought i would live a life a like that..picture me inside the mysery of pain and i can't take it any more..never thought i would suffer a life like thiz..and i'm movin 2 the cemetary where all my ****** gettin buried..such a damn thang brothaz..
Outro:Letz stop doin thiz dirt and take a look around us.****** we can live a life better than this..hell ! we can be well-educated and graduate if we worked hard
2006-07-28 23:37:39 · 1 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
Hey Bulletproof! I read you're lyrics & realize how strongly you feel about this particular song...And, at just 16 years old!...You're much more mature than others your age!...I may have just met a Future Star!!!
What I've done...is tried to change your 1st paragragh a bit...trying to keep the "same idea "...but, tried to make it flow a bit better...more of a rhyming rap-style...if You like it fine, if not, do it your way!
Yo! Picture Us!...In This Misery of Pain!
Brotha ******* Offin' Each Other...Over & Over Again!
Yo! Let's stop blaming Others!...Maybe Dis ourselves First!...
Before this Madness...gets any Worse!
The Ghetto, Brotha, is a Nightmarish Trap...
Yo! We're Killing Each Other & All-Kinds-of-Crap!...
Don't fall into it - Get Out if you can...
Yo! Get Out Now ...or ride...the Police Van!
I could help you further with lyrics, if you'd like...But, Your initial lyrics really get your Point across!...I'm from Canada & we don't have the horrible ghettos up here - like down in the U.S.!...Nor, the Extreme Prejudicism!...I've visited & seen how miserable it can be!
Actually, I'm white & dating a Black Girl from the Caribbean!...
Good Luck!
2006-07-29 02:13:09 · answer #1 · answered by AlbertaGuy 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋