I am trying to write up a flyer for a nonprofit charity to help keep my husband here for his family. I am following all the legal stuff, but the wording for the flyer seems off...
Can you help with the wording?
Cj is his kids' Life. His children look forward to the moment he returns from work everyday. Cj has always been a great Daddy to Xander and Lily. He brings home the bacon and cooks it too!
Cj takes good care of his kids and their Mommy too! He loves them before everything, including himself.
Right now he's in some legal trouble where his family needs some serious help too keep him out of Jail.
When Cj was still a kid his boss sent him to drive an uninsured car. He was unaware of the uninsured status of the car. As he was leaving his place of employment he was involved in an auto-collision. He was therefore responsible for the cost of the repairs. He nows owes $12,000. He is court-ordered to pay this or he will face time in jail.
Please Help Cj stay home with us
2006-07-28
21:38:04
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Please just let me know if the wording sounds okay
2006-07-28
21:46:29 ·
update #1