OK, be honest, brutal, or whatever!!
Life is often taken for granted,
and be it what it may,
If you were to look back at all you have done
what would you have to say?
would you change anything you have done so far
or leave it as it is?
Such as gone to college or even not had kids?
Would you alter the things that have happened to you
the good and the bad
or think of what you used to have or what you never had?
ok thats just some not finished but what do you think of it so far??
2006-07-28 08:33:35 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Other - Entertainment
Okay, I think this is good so far. Personally, you may want to knock some things off. Just so that it flows better. I don't think line 9, "the good and the bad", really belongs. It seems a little out of place. The line "would you change anything you have done so far or leave it as it is?", may sound a little better if you change it to "would you change anything you have done, or leave it as is." Those are just a couple suggestions. This is good. You may just want to go over it again and make sure you think it flows. Nice job.
2006-07-28 08:49:27 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would change a few bad decisions I have made. Nothing major. I think that I have lead a good life & been a good person.
2006-07-28 15:44:32 · answer #2 · answered by jagerchick80 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
pretty stinked so far, but i wouldn't change the past, i'm thinking of doing things differently from now on..
2006-07-28 15:38:46 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
no just leave thing as they are .
2006-07-28 15:37:12 · answer #4 · answered by idontkno 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋