i have to give a poem to my girlfriend is this one good?

Question

My love you purify my soul
I was lonley you cuddeld me
I was sick you sent an angel at my door.

all my friends have gone,and wept while trying to make a stand

but i still belive in your gentle hand


I remember when you walked into my life you
said you will allways be there
and you made me smile just for me to know
you still care.

while all the kingdoms on earth, are falling and all my lies have been told

i know we will be together for each to hold


when I could not see so you opend my mind
I could not feel so you opend my heart
my love you are so devine
I cannot bring you the moon nor the stars
but I love you God and thats what
you wanted me to say all along

i wrote this myself

Answer 1

it's good other than the spelling mistakes/typos.


My love you purify my soul
I was lonely you cuddled me
I was sick you sent an angel at my door.

all my friends have gone,and wept while trying to make a stand

but i still believe in your gentle hand


I remember when you walked into my life you
said you will allways be there
and you made me smile just for me to know
you still care.

while all the kingdoms on earth, are falling and all my lies have been told

i know we will be together for each to hold


when I could not see so you opened my mind
I could not feel so you opened my heart
my love you are so devine
I cannot bring you the moon nor the stars
but I love you God and thats what
you wanted me to say all along

Answer 2

Roses are red,
and violets are blue'
your spirit is gentle
and that shines thru
your love so hopeful
the words you say
are welcoming angels
to follow and pray

your humble heart
and soul sincere,
it strikes a smile
and dries a tear,

so continue to feel
what you write and say

and remember love is better
if you together do pray.

Answer 3

Yes

Answer 4

I would say that other than a few misspellings it's great. I think your girlfriend will love it, especially since you wrote it yourself. That takes time, care and sincere effort to show her how much you care about her.
So to specifically answer your question, yes, I think it's good.
Way to go.

Answer 5

The basic thought is O.K. It would help a lot if you cleaned up the spelling and added some appropriate punctuation.

Answer 6

It sends a great message, but the stanzas aren't in any kind of format.

Answer 7

First off, Why do you HAVE to write your girlfriend a poem? Anyways it is really good♥

Answer 8

cool. use some punctuation though. commas would especially help i think, if in the same line.

Answer 9

It is very good ...but check your spelling

Answer 10

She will love it.