Can anyone reword this statement?
Econo-Power International Corporation dedicates itself to making on-site coal based gasification the alternative fuel of choice in the North American industrial energy market.
2006-07-27 08:18:28 · 5 answers · asked by Girl 5 in Business & Finance ➔ Corporations
You might change 'dedicates itself' to 'is dedicated,' throw in a little punctuation, and what you've got is fine.
2006-07-27 08:31:37 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 9⤊ 3⤋
Econo Power International Corporation is dedicated to provide on-site coal which is the based gasification alternative fuel of choice in the North American industrial energy market.
2006-07-27 08:24:36 · answer #2 · answered by Unique 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Econo-Power International Corporation is dedicated to making on-site coal based gasification the choice alternate fuel for North America's industrial energy needs.
(original statement: 23 words)
(reworded statement: 21 words)
2006-07-27 08:26:53 · answer #3 · answered by ensign183 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
please dont take offence to this, yet thats the shitiest MS I even have ever considered....to acquire 200K via XXXX....... that should not be in there.....in any respect !!!!.... i could additionally take out computerized first determination too.. something seems ok bear in mind: a venture assertion is what sells you employer...the image you elect your purchasers to work out your employer as...(ethical behaviour, passenger convenience, clever pricing, social resposibility and so on....)
2016-11-03 03:17:44 · answer #4 · answered by filonuk 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
maybe defining "gasification" would help
2006-07-27 08:21:55 · answer #5 · answered by Dwight D J 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋