who can rap really good please i need help?

Question

i want a small short sweet rap for ma bf plzz

Answer 1

Yo baby you light up my life
Perhaps one day i'll be your wife

We chill and hang out
You rock my world, there's no doubt

I wrote this for you to see
How much you mean to me

So let's have a good time
cause it ain't no crime

Answer 2

I NEED LOVE by LL Cool J

When I'm alone in my room sometimes I stare at the wall
and in the back of my mind I hear my conscience call
Telling me I need a girl who's as sweet as a dove
for the first time in my life, I see I need love
There I was giggling about the games
that I had played with many hearts, and I'm not saying no names
Then the thought occured, tear drops made my eyes burn
as I said to myself look what you've done to her
I can feel it inside, I can't explain how it feels
all I know is that I'll never dish another raw deal
Playing make believe pretending that I'm true
holding in my laugh as I say that I love you
Saying amor kissing you on the ear
whispering I love you and I'll always be here
Although I often reminsce I can't believe that I found
a desire for true love floating around
Inside my soul because my soul is cold
one half of me deserves to be this way till I'm old
But the other half needs affection and joy
and the warmth that is created by a girl and a boy
I need love
I need love


You could only do the beginning of this rap

WRITE YOUR OWN
Title - Write a Rap Song
By - Bob Urbani
Subject - Music
Grade Level - 6-8
Raps are talk songs. They are not sung; they are spoken. They have a very heavy beat and a lot of rhyme. Behind the speaker of a rap, there might be original music, "scratching" sounds, and parts of other peoples' songs.
To write your own rap, begin with your topic. You have to know enough about your topic to rap about it. I usually make it school, friends or family and always MUST be in a positive sense. Once you learn all about your topic you're ready to rap.
Tell the whole story of your ballot topic in rhyme. Most raps rhyme in 'couplets." That means lines rhyme two at a time. Lines one and two rhyme with each other, but not with the other lines. Lines 3 and 4 rhyme with each other, but not with the other lines. And so on. The two lines that rhyme together are a "Couplet."
Begin your lyrics with a line that has a strong beat or rhythm. Rhyme the next line with the first. Try to repeat the same rhythm in the second line, too. Then begin a new rhyme with the third line. The fourth line should rhyme with the third line. Keep repeating this rhyming pattern.
The beat can be different in different lines. Some lines can be short; others, long. You might want to have a "refrain" in your lyrics. A refrain is a group of lines that remain the same and are repeated throughout the song.
A Rhyming Alphabet:
Use this special phonetic alphabet to help you find more rhymes. Begin your word with each of the following letters and consonant blends; make a list of all the "words" that make sense.
B,D,F,G,H,J,K,L,M,N,P,Q,R,S,T,V,W,Z, BL, BR,CH,DR,FL,FR,GL,GR,KL,KR,PR,SH,SHR,Sl,ST,STR,TH,THR,TR
good luck!

Answer 3

I have been rappin since I was 13 I am 19 now and I do all types of raps. I can free style, flow, fast rap, r&b rap, and I can slow rap... I mean rapping is a great talent and every one dont have it. I have been doing this for a while and I am thinkin about going into the music business with 2 other friends who love to rap. I mean its not something u wake up doing u have to know ur comfort zone with rapping and u have to know ur talents... Some people can rap or should I say rhyme but they cant free style or slow rap.... I can do alot of things with rap and I build upon my talents and what I know.. When I rap I rap about life and past experiences rather it be a relationship, a break up, a fight, a wedding, a funeral, a friend, a enemy, or myself in general..... So thats why I like what I do...........

Answer 4

OK.... here ya go lil' rapper 'un.. sing to him...

btw - this is my own original stuff.. so i AM expectin at least da 10points!!
Ohh.. and to all REST of u wannabes out there.. u cant' try n copy this as yr own coz its published in my song book already... and COPYRIGHTED.. to MEE

Oh ma darlin'
I need ya lovin'
Everytime I c ya
I cant stop a-shakin
B ma lova
Hold me 4-eva
lets write our story
love means neva sayin sorry
keep a-movin wit me
Dontcha release me
coz u r ma boi
gonna show ya how to play
move to da rhythm
lets shake together foreva
every day!!
YEAH!

Answer 5

Ludacris

Answer 6

Ok ill improvise kay? (I like rap ^^)

Hey boy you make me flip
Ur hotter than those guys on that g-unit clip
May I kiss your lip
When we make a physical contact, ooo I feel the temperature rising.
Can't you feel my body getting hotter?
C'mon and let's kiss in the water.
But hey, I don't just wanna be dirty.
Cause a lil romance would'nt harm.
And the way you talk to me makes my heart go warm.
Let's be toghetha for eva,
Cause I don't wanna lose ya.
So everyday I'll pray so you'll stay in my way.
I love you and ain't nuthing else to say.

Hope you like it. =)

Answer 7

from your point of view...
when we pass each other up, all i say is hi
but what wanna say for real is 'hey babe, you fly'
i've developed something more than infatuation
& im thinkin love's finally got application
to my life...since you made your entrance
cuz you're the only dude that i pay attention
i dont know what it is...i cant describe it
why i wanna be the one and only chick you vibe wit
so...it's a fact that i cherish you
& maybe one day we'll talk about marriage too
baby, know it's fo sho that i care for you
& for now know im around & i'm there for you.

Answer 8

a rap about what? i write rhymes all day everyday. check my crew out at www.elementalscienceproject.com and send me an email about what you want the rap to be about and i will scribble you up something. email me @ [e-mail]

Answer 9

the best rap is you for me

Answer 10

If you like rap, you do need help, indeed.