That is the link to the full biography.
http://www.superherohype.com/forums/showpost.php?p=9607626&postcount=39
After reading you can tell me what you think.
2006-07-26 22:53:53 · 12 answers · asked by Jason C 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Comics & Animation
Ok on depowering him. I suppose I could do this tell me what you think.
(Powers: Peak human strength, Bulletproof durability, Normal speed, energy blasts, near invulnerability, command of shooting stars.
Weapons: Star vehicle)
The Peak human strength means he can lift twice his own body weight. He can be hurt by the super villans powers. He can withstand bullets from guns explosions from other weapons bombs tanks and all that other stuff. His speed is still the same as a human. For example on the Super Villans powers say Dr. Doom shoots him with a energy blast or Electro then he is going to feel it. Also if Sandman another enemy of Spiderman hits him with a weapon from his hand or hands he will feel it.
2006-07-27 21:04:58 · update #1
you put way too much time into it. and i think most wont even make it past the name. just make a model of it. or movie.
2006-07-26 22:57:53 · answer #1 · answered by Britness 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Jason, focus less on this character's powers, and more on his motivation. Give him more of a life and then introduce powers, one at a time. A lot of story tellers will give you all of the information right up front and leave you with nothing new to experience later on, its called pacing. You should do as a few people suggested, and limit his powers more. I understand that you're looking to make an incredible and lasting character, that is the paramount of heroes, a guy that can stand the tests of time, but what good is reading a story, or looking at a book that really holds no conflict for a character that can just solve all of his own problems, or destroy any villain in his path? None what so ever. If you want a long lasting, great hero, follow the Spider man formula, use his personal life, give him interesting, yet limited powers, and focus more on drama and conflict than how amazing the character is. Good luck.
2006-07-27 08:39:07 · answer #2 · answered by illustrat_ed_designs 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
What kind of superhero gets knocked out after a brawl with muggers?
In my experience the only way to gain super powers is by supernatural means.When a gift is given,then a gift must be returned.Superpowers do not come without a price.
2006-08-04 05:26:16 · answer #3 · answered by mystic_master3 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
A bit much and too similar to the whole Superman thing, or even Mr. Incredible. I tend to like more original takes on hero powers, or a better back story and personal confliction.
2006-07-30 18:18:41 · answer #4 · answered by But why is the rum always gone? 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
A little too "super" there mate, and not enough "hero."
Invulnerable, irresistable strength and long-range "shooting stars". This guy is Superman without the flying.
Take it down a notch or three and you will have a more interesting character to work with. Otherwise, every conflict will be utterly lethal, as well as real short - "I disintegrate him" or "He disintegrated me".
IMHO.
2006-07-27 05:59:39 · answer #5 · answered by Grendle 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I'm going to agree with the first three answers.
2006-07-27 05:59:19 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
To much to read. How does he look like? We need visuals.
2006-07-27 05:59:28 · answer #7 · answered by Carin 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think u need to seriously get laid x
2006-07-27 05:56:44 · answer #8 · answered by xxlil_moggiexx 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you need a life so d i when i spend tme on here
2006-07-27 06:34:05 · answer #9 · answered by Steven F 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
u need to get laid
SOOOOOOOON
2006-08-03 20:21:53 · answer #10 · answered by angel 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋