i dont know what to do
fuel prices gettin high
mothers gonna die
payin to much for the gallon
gonna get me a black stallion
how can a niga drive by
when price of gas so high
bling bling pimp out mags
fuel price puttin me in rags
hundy dollars hoes i cant buy
have to give 2 dollar hoes a try
do drive bys on my push bike
bustin on the mic
for all yo hoes who are askin me
when will i be on mtv
niga say no way
im under ground a to the Mother#@$#$ k
cant get my high on any more
sniffing petrol makin me poor
better rob drug store
2006-07-26 19:09:33 · 9 answers · asked by arghhh 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
clever, very clever.......... Gosh people don't like you huh?.... It's okay, I'm your fan LMAO :)>
2006-07-27 05:17:06 · answer #1 · answered by heidielizabeth69 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
We all Have Reality .........
gas price high less ask why when soldiers die
presidency called it the urgency but urgently
wasnt it saudi arabian that bomed us
not country with unfavored policies ?
it aint hard to see more money for gas
makes us think wars connected to our currency
the ones we destroy are the ones with same
problem high priced government while livin in poverty
part of me deserted what i can see over loyalty
fight and die for nothin other then government / society
who feels better u then me knowing its conspiracy
no its piracy they give us their lives .... yet we cant
even give back their own lives thats our hospitality
2006-07-27 02:54:31 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i dont know if youve ever taken an english class with poetry and things like that in it (not to sound offensive) but its not good when you rhyme every single sentence the same like that mix it up put the rhythem in the middle of the sentence or try something else, it just kind of bored me
2006-07-27 02:32:28 · answer #3 · answered by coolgirllove2 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Here's a little song I wrote
You might want to sing it note for note
Don't worry, be happy.
In every life we have some trouble
But when you worry you make it double
Don't worry, be happy.
Don't worry, be happy now.
*Don't worry, be happy.
Don't worry, be happy.
Don't worry, be happy.
Don't worry, be happy.
Ain't got no place to lay your head
Somebody came and took your bed
Don't worry, be happy.
The landlord say your rent is late
He may have to litigate
Don't worry, be happy.
*(Look at me -- I'm happy.
Don't worry, be happy.
Here I give you my phone number.
When you worry, call me, I make you happy.
Don't worry, be happy.)
Ain't got no cash, ain't got no style
Ain't got no gal to make you smile
Don't worry, be happy.
'Cause when you worry your face will frown
And that will bring everybody down
Don't worry, be happy.
*(Don't worry, don't worry, don't do it. Be happy.
Put a smile on your face. Don't bring everybody down.
Don't worry. It will soon pass, whatever it is.
Don't worry, be happy. I'm not worried, I'm happy... )
2006-07-27 02:17:23 · answer #4 · answered by soulroute™ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
needs a little bit mo work but keep tryin
2006-07-27 02:19:18 · answer #5 · answered by wifey material 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
hmmm...ok, I think I am getting old. Or maybe reading just isn't the same as if I could hear it.....
2006-07-27 02:27:19 · answer #6 · answered by mrsjav 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not bad!
2006-07-27 02:26:53 · answer #7 · answered by let the speakers blow your mind 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i'll tell you what to do, never ever rap again
2006-07-27 02:14:17 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
not bad. keep it up
2006-07-27 02:25:00 · answer #9 · answered by tim e 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋