People are afraid of the unknown; therefore, it is hindering equal rights.
2006-07-26 18:06:27 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Other - Society & Culture
No, it doesn't.
People are afraid of the unknown, therefore, it is a hinderance of equal rights.
or
People are afraid of the unknown which is hindering equal rights.
or
People are afraid of the unknown thus causing a hinderance of equal rights.
ETA: Though, in the future, it would be easier to help if we had more sentences surrounding that one for context. :)
2006-07-26 18:13:00 · answer #1 · answered by Oh no 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Fear of the unknown hinders equal rights. Probably a better sentence though its verity is probably unknown. All things being equal, you may want to insert something that shows better cause and effect relationship.
2006-07-27 01:41:39 · answer #2 · answered by shazam 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
When in doubt, find another way to say it.
Society's fear of the unknown is hindering equal rights.
2006-07-27 01:18:36 · answer #3 · answered by 5cent Frog 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
screw the english teacher it's fine but,,,,,equal rights kinda died years ago.It is also the reason why more women have to work and pay someone else to watch their kids.In the old days a man could earn enough to support a family if his wife wanted to stay home with the kids.Equal Right's did about as much damage as it did good.
But,two things the world will never really have is equal rights and Equal protection of the law.
2006-07-27 01:18:10 · answer #4 · answered by jgmafb 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Um, well, although structurally sound, it's missing the transition as to why people are afraid of equal rights.
2006-07-27 02:24:14 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is quite simply really. All I have ever done to get great abs is play basketball! Thanks for asking.
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2006-07-27 02:57:59 · answer #6 · answered by stephenguise 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's very poorly constructed and doesn't make sense.
2006-07-27 01:11:25 · answer #7 · answered by notyou311 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yea if your running for some sort of office
2006-07-27 01:10:03 · answer #8 · answered by sinnerrgonetohell 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good job.
2006-07-27 01:09:45 · answer #9 · answered by Zeta 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
There is no such sentence like that.
2006-07-27 01:09:48 · answer #10 · answered by janu 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋