this is only one of my poems but it is my favorite. what do u think?
Once Upon
Once upon a broken heart
That was ripped and torn apart
Once upon a girl who was crying
Cause the boy she loved was lieing
Once upon a heart that's shattered
But the boy didn't think it mattered
Once upon a time
You should've been mine
But once upon a time
Isn't always true
Cause you didn't love me
As much as I love you
So once upon a wish come true
This poem means how much
♥ I love You ♥
2006-07-26 15:40:21 · 9 answers · asked by Bosnian_chic_2012 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Other - Family & Relationships
That was beautiful? Your blessed because I can't even speell.I know it waz corny.
2006-07-26 15:47:37 · answer #1 · answered by Byron L 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
this is my poem:
bottled feelings
sometimes i run, sometimes i hide
paper heart that tears easily
clipped wings of fantasy
fairy godmother is on holiday
pumpkin dust fading into zilch
can paper aeroplanes sodden with tears fly?
mood swings
fly high high into the sky
the next minute
down in the dumps
running away
a lone figure in the dead of the night
at the crossoads of life
tattered map
shadows of the past
haunts. prowls. stalks.
scarred for life
will i ever smile again
broken dreams
twirling. swirling. whirling.
in a dark world
oh just drop dead
****** up life
but i will survive
life is still beautiful
2006-07-26 22:43:03 · answer #2 · answered by Princess illusion 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
once upon time this poem boring
once upon time I fell asleep
once opon time I woke up
once opon time I smashed my computer
After reading once upon time poem
2006-07-26 22:48:03 · answer #3 · answered by lostroad94 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's all right. shoulda made it longer though cuz i think you kinda cut your flow short when you had something going. oh yeah you spelled 'lieing' wrong too. it's 'lying'. but i mean this was meaningful reading material. good stuff
2006-07-26 22:43:34 · answer #4 · answered by metronome 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
lieing = lying
2006-07-26 22:44:18 · answer #5 · answered by B.J. H 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
beautifully too true in many cases.
2006-07-26 22:43:54 · answer #6 · answered by red dragon 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice poem,,! from experience??? nice... very nice..
2006-07-26 22:46:42 · answer #7 · answered by _-rei-_ 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I LOVE IT TELL IT TO YOUR GUY!
2006-07-26 22:42:59 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think you are a dumbass!
2006-07-26 22:42:49 · answer #9 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋