Ok I really didn't know where to put this but my friend thinks that I should send one of my poems to the newspaper for some reason and I don't. What do you think of this poem?
You took away my dignity,
You took away my pride.
Now all I can go home with
Is my empty heart inside.
You took away everything,
Everything that I knew,
You took away everything,
Except my heart but maybe that too.
I do not know what's left, but maybe somewhere inside,
Is a little piece of myself,
That no one will ever find.
2006-07-26 12:43:17 · 16 answers · asked by ♥Lovin♥ 2 in Pregnancy & Parenting ➔ Adolescent
That's awesome! Send it in. If you want more answers you might want to go under literature or something. But it's awesome!
2006-07-26 13:09:07 · answer #1 · answered by Shawny 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I Love It.....So Beautiful And Touching!
Yup Go For It Girl!!
Sincerelly,
Babylicious B.K.A Cassandra
2006-07-26 20:05:36 · answer #2 · answered by xBabyliciousNenax 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think that poem is awesome!!
I write poems too!!!
I think you should enter a contest. There is a free poetry contest from Creative Comunications.
The web-site is www.poeticpower.com if you want to enter. Again it's free
If you win you could get a grant
I think your poem is really good.
2006-07-26 19:51:01 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is pretty awesome. Copy-Paste-Save to Computer.
I love it. Seriously, send it in!
2006-07-26 19:55:17 · answer #4 · answered by trainboy765 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Heck yeah. 10 stars if I were to rated it.
2006-07-26 20:42:05 · answer #5 · answered by Viety 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
the poem is good
2006-07-26 20:22:40 · answer #6 · answered by steven b 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
go 4 it!
2006-07-27 11:36:16 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
hi...that was lovely and nice....you should send it....do you have happy poems too?...
2006-07-26 19:55:54 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
tormented soul - find peace
2006-07-26 20:06:13 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
take ur friends advice ASAP it was great
2006-07-26 20:20:46 · answer #10 · answered by Finane K 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋