Can you rate these 2 poems? (1-10)?

Question

1) There's an empty hope that lingers with ever breath I take/
A quiet desperation that grows beneath a lake/
This fear is all around me holding every limb down/
It's a subtle paranoia that feeds off every sound/
I am anchored to this ocean where I'll die in liquid tears/
If I don't come up for air in time I'll surely disappear


2) When water flows in an empty bay/
After the moon rises and the people lay/
The mist sprays gently onto the rocks/
While the devil sits on the old wooden dock/
Many people say that he is the one/
Who will over take the setting sun/
But I am inclined to disagree/
For that battle will be between the devil and me

Answer 1

1) 5 (the sentences are too long, it should have 12 small sentences)

2) 8 (very good, u can almost listen to the music of the words)

Answer 2

With 1 being poor and 10 being excellent:

1) 1
2) 2

Answer 3

i would say there are both pretty good
i think a 7 for both
sorry guess that wasnt clear lol
the first one a 7
and the second one a 7
not a 7 together lol

Answer 4

do you be responsive to what's incredibly worth combating for whilst it is not incredibly worth demise for? Does it take you breath away and you sense your self suffocating? Does the discomfort weight out the satisfaction? and you seek for a place to hide? Does somebody ruin your heart interior? you're in ruins One, 21 weapons Lay down your arms supply up the combat One, 21 weapons Throw up your arms into the sky You and that i...

Answer 5

I don't really like giving poetry a 1-10 rating, but... I really liked the first one.

Answer 6

1. 4
2. 6

Answer 7

6 and 5
if I may offer a comment though. They sound a little rushed. Like you could have done more and just stopped.

Answer 8

1. you sound suicidal i give it a 6 but go talk to someone
2. i give it a 10, loved it

Answer 9

1. 9.9
2. 10.9

Both of the poems are excellent especially the second one!

Answer 10

1 is a 4
2is a 7


AB