I PUT THIS IN MY PROFILE FOR AIM AND I WANT TO KNOW IF IT MAKES ANY SENSE.
there are some things in this world
that you just cant deal with anymore
there are people in this world
who you have to let go
there are things in my life
that are missing
and i know i wont get them back
straight away
so ill keep my head high
and wait until the right time comes
wait until ive regained everything
thats been lost
i will stay strong.
2006-07-26 06:42:45 · 14 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Neat.
2006-07-26 06:45:20 · answer #1 · answered by RainCloud 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Honestly??? I think you don't take your problem as it should.
You have to be more open-minded and realize that you cat regain everything back!!
you have to look in to the future and gain everything that you put on your mind!that's the only way you can manege to be happy, willing to do more every day and create a stronger version of yourself!!
Keep your head high every problem has a solution!!!
2006-07-26 07:15:46 · answer #2 · answered by Diana C 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
No, it doesn't really make sense without you putting it in context. What have you lost? Why are you staying strong? Huh? This definitely requires some further explanation, otherwise it just makes you sound melodramatic and self-pitying.
2006-07-26 06:46:19 · answer #3 · answered by Julia L. 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yeah, but if it's YOUR writing then why are you worried if it makes sense? Many of the great works out there lack sense unless you go deeper to the writer's soul. But in general, yours i quite simple and easy to understand. Good job. But for future reference....just write what comes out and don't worry.
2006-07-26 06:47:35 · answer #4 · answered by boz4425 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I understand it.
But when i read it i realized that you got hurt by someone, at less thats the impression i had.
I think u need to emphasize more that you are strong.
2006-07-26 06:46:38 · answer #5 · answered by Finy 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it and understand where you are coming from. What I don't understand is how you don't think it makes sense since you wrote it.
2006-07-26 06:47:17 · answer #6 · answered by Dimples 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yea it makes sence.
I like it!
Good job
2006-07-26 06:47:21 · answer #7 · answered by :) 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very Cool!! And I'm hard to impress.
2006-07-26 06:47:02 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's a bit wordy, but it makes sense to me.
2006-07-26 06:45:28 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
it makes sense if that is how you feel. i think a lot of people could relate to those words. kinda sad!
2006-07-26 06:46:12 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋