thank you again for your answers and some of you said i should write, well i have one thing i wrote about my parents. can you please tell me what you think. ( its a song )
* IT WAS BEST*
siting down eating dinner, see you from the corner of my eye
a sad song playing on the radio, i know your begining to cry.
all of a sudden ive lost appetite, dont wana eat anymore
but we have all felt like this, since mum walked out the door.
Chorus: where ever she is, where ever she could be
where did she go, she didnt tell me
i love her so much, dad i love you to
but it was best for me, and it was best for you
now we are in those bad times, i can not tell a lie
im sorry to open up and tell you this but
mum had to say her goodbye
all of a sudden ive just lost my faith, dont wana live anymore
but we have all felt like this
since mum walked out the door
Chorus: 2 times
2006-07-25 22:35:21 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
A sad sad song. Well written. try to get it published. Nothing ventured...nothing gained.
2006-07-26 05:22:28 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
very nice...liked it
the first long post i rad till the end
2006-07-26 05:41:42 · answer #2 · answered by anni_shaa Yeap Yip 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
cool
2006-07-26 06:29:05 · answer #3 · answered by JULIE 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very good you get your point across
2006-07-26 05:39:01 · answer #4 · answered by pink dolphin 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
COOL =>
2006-07-26 05:40:37 · answer #5 · answered by ♫♫♫ EL Dindo 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow its coool..............do u know i am singing this song now with my own music compositiom............its 2 great....
2006-07-26 05:40:26 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
great:)
2006-07-26 05:39:34 · answer #7 · answered by Razor 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋