There you go.... causing people to have problems lol. Nice... except for the kid part... that's just wrong.
2006-07-25 22:32:53
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answered by heidielizabeth69 7
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I only liked this
old ladys say im on crack
because this brothers black
all the 2 dollar hoes know im fly
and this
mary had a little lamb
its fleese was white as snow
mary got hooked on crack
now she a 2 dollar hoe
2006-07-26 03:29:46
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answered by LavishFashion 3
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The subject matter seems like a black sheep ripoff. The rhythm is pretty inconsistent, so unless you like to like to stretch syllables to fit the beat ala 2pac, it will sound a little choppy. But f--k it man that's a bachelor's degree in English/Creative Writing talking.
Rap isn't about strict meter and originality, it's about fun and this s--t made me laugh especially "all the 2 dollar hoes know I'm fly/I'm sniffin the glue to get my high"
I like it overall. It's not going platinum, but I like it.
2006-07-26 03:34:49
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answered by Bubba 2
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Hey ***** my mother is an old lady you f*** wit my momma ill bust a cap in YO ***
2006-07-26 03:31:03
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answered by natedaog12 1
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I'd like to hear them with music to give you my opinion
2006-07-26 03:29:51
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answered by tokala 4
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thats awesome dude
keep up the good work dude
2006-07-26 03:43:03
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answered by pjk837 5
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no not really, it smacks of ignorance and a poor sense of humour
thanks for trying though
2006-07-26 03:32:39
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answered by the blue olive 3
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Keep practicing.
2006-07-26 03:29:55
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answered by ? 4
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NO COMMENT BUT KEEP DOIN U I AINT TRYNA HATE ON YA RAP FLOW
2006-07-26 03:29:57
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answered by wifey material 4
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I can honestly say I wish i didn't read it,no offense.
2006-07-26 03:46:44
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answered by djcue262 2
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what does 'peace' have to do with that awful poem?
2006-07-26 03:30:39
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answered by lilli b 3
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