Minimalist poetry is the art of saying more with less. You could write a fifty-thousand word novel and end up drawing the same conclusions as a four line poem.
Having More
by Me
She wasn’t quite pretty enough
to be someone’s trophy wife.
So she focused on her talents
and ended up with a life.
2006-07-25 18:28:51 · 13 answers · asked by Doc Watson 7 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
kind of sad...I thought this was going a different direction.
good though
2006-07-25 18:34:17 · answer #1 · answered by ♫Hope♫ 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Not a bad effort
But like the poet from Japan
My poems never read well
Because I always try to fit just as many words into the final line as I possibly can
2006-07-25 18:31:49 · answer #2 · answered by Perkins 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I don't think Gill234 quite got exactly what you meant. The poem was brilliant by the way. Short and sweet.
2006-07-26 02:08:36 · answer #3 · answered by Irish_bi_female 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
He decreased his head, stuck his bum contained in the air, to make the inevitable painless invoice endured his flight, not deviating a mite, and his head went up the cow's anus improve, improve
2016-10-15 09:53:12 · answer #4 · answered by ? 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
He has nothing more to say
He made a poem just to make her stay
He's always on her way
If she could, she'll throw him away
2006-07-25 18:34:50 · answer #5 · answered by j ♥ f 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's good, but short. Try adding a verse or two.
2006-07-25 18:30:53 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
You have talent. That took me five seconds to read.
2006-07-25 18:30:17 · answer #7 · answered by saxophonegamer 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i love poetry its very good
2006-07-25 18:32:48 · answer #8 · answered by ™oh..melissa! 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Love it.
2006-07-25 18:32:03 · answer #9 · answered by barbaradjt 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very good
2006-07-25 18:30:12 · answer #10 · answered by Neil G 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋