no im not emo by the way :P
Hanging here so helplessly,
on this terribly Delicate string...
and it's All The Small Things,
that keep me Dangling...
And I'm all alone here, just hanging
and I'm getting sick of holding on.
It's pointless; as I'm slowing slipping...
Maybe I should just Fall and Be Gone...
2006-07-25 17:17:23 · 9 answers · asked by buttheadhatesyou 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Sounds sad. Very pretty though.
2006-07-25 17:20:35 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
good poem except one place you used wrong grammer instead slowing it should say slowly it would sound better. But other than that it sounds great. I like it.
2006-07-26 00:22:55 · answer #2 · answered by 0 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it. You don't have to be emo to write about non happy emotions or feelings. Good job!
2006-07-26 00:23:43 · answer #3 · answered by merlinsdragonfire 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Depressing, eye opening, bittersweet , bitter (the subject) sweet (your writing)
2006-07-26 00:23:41 · answer #4 · answered by Italian Girl 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds like you are depressed and suicidal. Maybe you should talk to somebody about it.
2006-07-26 00:20:59 · answer #5 · answered by opjames 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its great..you can imply that to your lyrics for ur punk band! its really good though!!!
2006-07-26 00:58:52 · answer #6 · answered by rawruhh 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like that one.
2006-07-26 00:20:39 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
sad and beautifully written....
2006-07-26 00:21:19 · answer #8 · answered by blue_bee 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats good! i like it!
2006-07-26 00:29:00 · answer #9 · answered by $ I~♥~ELMO $ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋