I am not trying to advertise/sell anything on yahoo answers, i just want opinions on a flyer that i made. if you saw this would it interest you? would you call for more info? if not, why? and what would you add to make it better?:
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2006-07-25 14:02:35 · 15 answers · asked by krystal 6 in Beauty & Style ➔ Skin & Body
i would try to compress it a little...like imagine u yourself standing at a billboard. You would be more likely to read a pamphlet that was a little shorter. Then when they like what they see they are more likely to call for details...
i would do it like this...
LADIES...are u tired of seeing the effects of aging on your skin? I have found the answer...call for a free demonstration, no strings attached.
(or something to that effect) Whatever u choose I wish u luck!!
2006-07-25 14:13:47 · answer #1 · answered by lexxie124 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I feel humans can consider loose to have the opinion that they wish. They must be competent to specific there opinion, and those that concentrate (which must be plenty of humans) must have an open brain, and possibly difference there opinion. Some reviews would possibly not develop into something, nevertheless it doesnt imply there nugatory. Even if no person treasures your opinion, you must. Its what makes you who you're.
2016-08-28 17:56:36 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds great! it won't interest me though because im young and my skin isn't sagging but i think it will entice older people. if the product works in a short period of time say, " starts giving you results in a week" or something like that. i know about advertising because entrepeneurial is a mandatory class in school and i made advertisements for my company. good luck! =]
also cut down on words. explain alot in a couple of sentences.
2006-07-25 14:07:50 · answer #3 · answered by xperfectegox 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The idea sounds great, I'd redo the beginning of the flyer with a more flashy introduction
2006-07-25 14:07:57 · answer #4 · answered by SupergirlKK 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not to burst your bubble, but it sounds like every other TV commercial that I see. There are soooo many age defying products around it would seem to be a hard sell.
2006-07-25 14:05:50 · answer #5 · answered by Mistrish 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think that you should use a more eye-catching title and probably cut a couple of sentences out. In other words make your point in a shorter way...people don't really like to read too much. But I think that its really good.
2006-07-25 15:16:55 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
To be perfectly honest, I think that it is much too wordy. People don't like to have to read that much on a flyer.
2006-07-25 14:07:09 · answer #7 · answered by Andi 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hi, sounds pretty good. Could you e-mail me and let me know what company you are working for. Just wondering.
2006-07-25 14:05:53 · answer #8 · answered by arthurbel33 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it sounds like a 7th grader doing a report
2006-07-25 14:06:04 · answer #9 · answered by ♥I ♥Me♥Me♥yahMe!!!! 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i would sell some of the stuff.
2006-07-25 14:04:59 · answer #10 · answered by ashly j 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋