Please rate my poem 1-10?

Question

Please be honest

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Trapped within the walls of fear,

into the darkness she peers.

She looks for one last bit of hope,

but with the pain,

she cannot cope.

Her confidence grows thin,

feels like the hard work has never been.

The tears run down her face,

all failure falls in place.

She falls to her knees and begins to pray,

the walls slowly fall,

for fear is not to stay.

She opened her eyes,

to another side.

Now the drakness,

is the one to hide.

Answer 1

WOW sometimes I like the poetic sides of guys. Honestly that was totally great did you write it yourself was this about anyone you know. I really liked heres a 10!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Good Job!!!!!!!!!!!!

Answer 2

5

Answer 3

6

Answer 4

That is a very good poem, i really like it. I am not much of a poem reader but i would give you 8 or 9 out of 10.

Answer 5

i imagine this a stunning poem, with spectacular imagery..i guess you've already defined your poem...your partitions represent who you're, and frequently once you've a closed door no one can pass into the room to make certain those partitions...with any success in the destiny you'll unencumber it :) As for the poem itself, i imagine you should strengthen it by rethinking the meter somewhat because some traces were somewhat lengthy and the poem can get sooo a lot extra ideal in case you purely tweak it up somewhat right here and there lotsa skill save penning :D

Answer 6

5, I don't know what a "drakness" is;

It's also kind of boring melodramatic self-pity poetry that's been done too often.

I liked the rhymes at times (oooh); I like writer's overall tone; the flow is so-so though (ooh, 'nuthah rhyme).

Answer 7

I am not abig fan of rhyme time but I say an 8

Answer 8

it is great 10 i really feel it ,it is gr8
i gave u 10 cuz u can really feel and can express the feelings in words touch others feelings
write another one soon and when u do this send it to me cuz it seems it will toich me too
here is mail [e-mail]
waiting 4another perfct poem

Answer 9

Good job young man. I give it a 9.

Answer 10

Not bad.Igive it a 9