Please be honest
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Trapped within the walls of fear,
into the darkness she peers.
She looks for one last bit of hope,
but with the pain,
she cannot cope.
Her confidence grows thin,
feels like the hard work has never been.
The tears run down her face,
all faliure falls in place.
She falls to her knees and begins to pray,
the walls slowly fall,
the sun embraces her to a brighter day.
2006-07-24
12:15:54
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Anonymous
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I want to change the very last line to.
"for fear is not to stay."
2006-07-24
12:23:38 ·
update #1
She opened her eyes,
to another side,
now the drakness is the one to hide.
2006-07-24
12:30:39 ·
update #2