Give me fairytales-by Jamii Nesbitt (song is copyrighted)
caress the bridge of my nose with your finger
Oh how the love around us lingers
it's so obvious
la, la, la
take me back into this thing called time
I am your violin, just play me
oh, endlessy
Chorus:
Give me fairytales
you know the drill
you write the book of our love
Give me sugar and spice
oh you know how I like it
open me up and read me
Ask me to wonder what tomorrow brings
Take time to listen to how the wind breathes
I know you'd a learn a thing or two
Getting quite sleepy
la, di, da
here in your arms I turn the light off in my mind
be patient 'til tomorrow
as i dream
Chorus
Oh, Got to fly away
Im higher than Ive ever been
But dont come with me
cause I need someone to catch me
as I fall back to you..to you
Chorus
Ask me to wonder what tomorrow brings
Ask me to wonder what tomorrow brings...
2006-07-23 02:46:41 · 8 answers · asked by silver 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
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and google: Jamii Nesbitt for more, enjoy!
2006-07-23 02:48:56 · update #1
Hey the lyrics is nice I like it especially the bridge part.. but I wish I heard the melody. Anyway keep it up and keep writing songs.. You must be really inspired, your song said it all.. You go girl!
I wish I had your talent.. :)
but I write short poems, you think that's close enough?
2006-07-23 03:40:01 · answer #1 · answered by *rocker chic* 3 · 2⤊ 3⤋
If this is a rustic or persons track, this is a winner. one element i could advise is which you lose the paragraph shape. Make it look like verses, and don't be afraid to reproduction key terms in the refrain: a single mom i artwork a 9 to 5 i've got been given a alluring daughter with some hazel eyes and whilst she smiles it lighting fixtures fixtures up the finished room yet there is in basic terms somewhat her heart that she is missin
2016-10-08 05:45:12 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like the one
We can share each other with songs
2006-07-23 02:50:38 · answer #3 · answered by adam 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like the song, you creative
2006-07-24 00:23:28 · answer #4 · answered by Nataline 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
What key are we in? Is there a modulation in the outchorus?
2006-07-23 02:53:00 · answer #5 · answered by phoephus 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I couldn't hear the music
2006-07-23 03:25:34 · answer #6 · answered by Velociraptor 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love it....great song :)
2006-07-23 02:54:55 · answer #7 · answered by jaybug34 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it has potential
2006-07-23 02:54:03 · answer #8 · answered by norwood 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋