Harmless.
I did no wrong.
All I did was love.
Why me?
Go ahead.
Wish me dead.
Why would I care anymore?
Bastards.
Evil.
Arrogant.
So I'm worthless?
Maybe to you.
I have one thing you've never had or felt.
Love.
You don't care?
Don't.
Wish me dead.
The world is like you anyways;
So go ahead.
I want to go.
I've tried.
You could say that I've given up.
I've tried.
There is no love.
No compassion.
Forgive me my God.
All I did was love.
Go ahead.
Kill me.
Help me.
Do something.
contemptuous.
I can't take it.
Take my life.
Wish me goodbye.
But please rememver all I did.
All I've said.
Never forget.
Wish me dead.
Hate me.
Kill me.
Just go ahead.
Pull the trigger.
I'm waiting.
I have nothing left.
You say you hate me.
It won't take long,
I know you want to.
I'm ready to leave your hell.
God forgive me.
I can't handle.
I won't handle.
Be my pleasure.
Go ahead.
Kill this love.
Love.
Hate.
Death.
Goodbye, my dear true love.
2006-07-22 17:50:22 · 9 answers · asked by Getroman 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
dude, or dudette? sounds like ya got some real issues in your love life? your lover not giving you the love you think that you are giving them? sounds like it to me from your poem.
I think that you shouldn't be so hard on yourself, and you shouldn't give this poem to the person that it was meant for... three reasons, 1 its obvious that it only looks like you are crying for they're attention ( that it sounds like your not getting anyway)
and 2 you need to hold your head up and not somber in your pain that this person is bring on you. if it hurts that bad, move on, but don't give them the satisfaction of knowing how much they have hurt you by showing them this poem.
and 3> if you give them this poem, they have won in crushing you!!! because your letting them know it.
you have to be strong, keep on trucking, and time will heal all my friend ;) take it from me, I know, have wrote many many poems myself. and always seems we write the best when we're hurting the most huh? other poets can relate.
peace to you my friend, keep your chin up!!! ;)
2006-07-22 18:04:46 · answer #1 · answered by babydoll 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds like it could be made into a song for Jewel, or Curt Cobain, or some heavy metal band.
2006-07-23 00:55:05 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Rambling is not necessarily poetry. You could use an editor.
2006-07-23 00:54:19 · answer #3 · answered by barelyliterate 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wasn't that a song from The Cure? If not, it should be!
2006-07-23 00:56:35 · answer #4 · answered by Brn_Eyed_Beauty 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
great
2006-07-23 00:59:35 · answer #5 · answered by radiology 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
this poem is realy good! i like it! ^_^
2006-07-23 00:54:22 · answer #6 · answered by tony's girl 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
OMG thats me LOL... :(
2006-07-23 00:56:41 · answer #7 · answered by microsvc 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
gag.
2006-07-23 00:53:57 · answer #8 · answered by Jaime L 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Please don't ask me that question again.
2006-07-23 00:53:16 · answer #9 · answered by Mark 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋