You can't see past my mask
There's nothing left inside
Only a hurting child
That I've tried so hard to hide
You can't look in my book
There's just too much inside
It holds my many mistakes
That are getting too hard to hide
You can't get close to me
There's too much emotion inside
Can't you see these walls?
They're meant to help me hide.
You can't fall in love with me
I have too much to hide
You wouldn't want to see
What I have kept inside.
2006-07-22 16:56:08 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
It's really sad, but amazing. I think a good title would be "Hidden"
2006-07-22 16:59:21 · answer #1 · answered by heartbroken 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love the poem. It speaks of sadness, hurt, pain, rejection from one's early childhood throughout adulthood. If I had to title the poem- there are several titles: 1) "Faceless" 2) "The Pain Inside" 3) "Hiding" 4) "What's Inside"
2006-07-23 00:02:29 · answer #2 · answered by THE SINGER 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it's the work of someone who is very confused and looking for answers. As a poem, it's not particularly good or catching. Find someone to talk to about your problems and go from there. You don't need a title, you need some professional help. I hope you get it.
2006-07-23 00:13:51 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Suggested names: Barrier - The Mask - The Wall - The Divide.
2006-07-22 23:59:58 · answer #4 · answered by TwilightWalker97 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it is a very good poem!! I would entitle it "Hidden Heart" or "Shielded Soul".....Keep up the excellent poetry! You have very good rhythm and it keeps the attention of the reader.
2006-07-23 01:56:38 · answer #5 · answered by Kelly + Eternal Universal Energy 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
How about ... well I think hidden is a good 1 like what that other person said.
2006-07-23 00:03:33 · answer #6 · answered by happy_funin_joy 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it is very well written. You do have the gift of talent. Maybe call it "Beyond The Mask"
2006-07-23 00:26:02 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I really like your poem. Its really interesting, and I like the words.A good name for it would be Behind the Mask.
2006-07-23 02:29:47 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like this poem - very nice. Maybe call it "Inside"
2006-07-23 00:00:28 · answer #9 · answered by lonely_girl3_98 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
"What I have kept inside", your own words
2006-07-23 00:10:31 · answer #10 · answered by Ion 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋