I wrote this for a friend who's son was killed in Iraq should I send it.
I had it copy righted. It's called Fallen Hero.
As life departs we mourn our loss, For he has paid the highest cost, We stood with pride while loved ones cried,Another of our Heroes died. We know that time will ease the pain, And thoughts
of good times will remain.We take with us a piece of him,And in our sons he lives again.
Their lives and dreams and chance to grow to repay a debt that we all owe. He lived a dream that few will know. Ithank him deeply Our Fallen Hero. (COPYWRITE 2006 ).I've never written a poem before so I don't know if this is worth sending. I served with the father of the boy who was killed and I knew this boy well. His dream was to make the military
his life. so should I send it?
2006-07-22 16:42:47 · 9 answers · asked by Bugman 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Other - Family & Relationships
I wrote this for their son the after attending the funeral.
2006-07-22 16:54:57 · update #1
I THINK THAT IT IS VERY BEAUTIFUL AND HEARTFELT, I
WOULD SEND IT , I SURE HIS PARENT WOULD APPRECIATE
IT. I'M SORRY FOR THERE LOSS. GOD BLESS YOU FOR THIS
WONDERFUL TRIBUTE TO THEIR SON AND ALL OF OURS
FALLEN HERO.
2006-07-22 16:51:22 · answer #1 · answered by luckystar 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
it's a good poem just make some grammar corrections and u should send it to him. that's a good thing ur doing.. i don't know this guy but thanks for caring this world needs more friends like u.
2006-07-22 23:56:07 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
you should definetly send it, its your way of being sympathetic; however, the fact that it was not originally wrote for him slightly degrades it, but not much. maybe try doing one especially for him
very good poem
2006-07-22 23:49:02 · answer #3 · answered by Ca2Ga 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes [and may GOD be with the family during there time of lossmy heart goes out to them
2006-07-22 23:48:58 · answer #4 · answered by ? 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Send it. I hope they appreciate the heartfelt sentiment.
2006-07-22 23:46:41 · answer #5 · answered by troutpotato 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yea sure!
why not it will show you care and maybe ease some of their pain
2006-07-22 23:47:19 · answer #6 · answered by wrestlersmama1967 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes
2006-07-22 23:55:30 · answer #7 · answered by shortyP 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
just go ahead n do it
2006-07-22 23:46:12 · answer #8 · answered by nikki 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
please send it
2006-07-22 23:48:00 · answer #9 · answered by flintgirl26 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋