What if you don’t love me?
If you don’t love me
I won’t find a way to tell if reality is real
I won’t be able to build a house of happiness
Over an empire of sadness
I f you don’t love me
I won’t trust myself
I will hate myself
For not trying to look for you when you were gone
For not trying chase you when you ran away
If you don’t love me
Nothing will save me from the loneliness of living without you
Nothing will stop misery from being around me
If you don’t love me
I will be lost inside your thoughts
Telling you that I’m waiting for you to love me
2006-07-22 15:31:00 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
It is very romantic and not only speak out your saying but what is in your heart. I love it and hopes that could give you cofident to write more poem. I also write poem too contact me with my email address.
2006-07-22 15:38:42 · answer #1 · answered by problemsolver86 3 · 3⤊ 1⤋
It's kind of simplistic, but perhaps that was the goal. But I truly admire anyone that is willing to express those kinds of emotions.
2006-07-22 22:38:03 · answer #2 · answered by rlw 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Plainish,not tasty enough for me, Hey thats just one mans opinion though!
2006-07-22 22:37:21 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's structurally sound but the content is rather needy and stalkerish.
2006-07-22 22:35:12 · answer #4 · answered by Lex 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very nice. I hope you have a girl in mind, to give it to.
2006-07-22 22:34:37 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I write poetry also and I think it is great
2006-07-22 22:44:01 · answer #6 · answered by teresa.hereford@sbcglobal.net 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I agree with lex...Get some backbone.
2006-07-22 22:37:48 · answer #7 · answered by sandra m 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It very romance
2006-07-22 22:33:52 · answer #8 · answered by Tori 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very good and very romantic.
2006-07-22 22:34:19 · answer #9 · answered by Jennifer Gayle 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sorry, don't like it, but it's a personal thing
2006-07-22 22:34:26 · answer #10 · answered by J 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋