In a Silent World
I lay down on the wet green grass
Burn and rot myself in pain
For I have seen and heard enough
Heard about torture again and again
For the lost can never be found
People could never understand
I lay here to feel the un-felt
Here on this bare solid land
People walk alone on streets
Go where ever the wind goes
If only we were shoulder to shoulder
Standing in infinite rows
What is so scary is to know
That no-one is by are side
For there can be no justice in the world
Were the cowards go run to hide
And where the loudest thunder strikes
It is silence to my ears
And softest sound of hate
Turns into my worst fears
2006-07-22 06:08:33 · 11 answers · asked by Anonymous in Games & Recreation ➔ Other - Games & Recreation
i like it...its really beautiful ♥
2006-07-22 06:11:58 · answer #1 · answered by cassie ♥ 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
It's pretty deep...But it sounds like you're very alone and someone may have let you down...if so, forgive this person and try to get on in ur life...!
2006-07-22 13:13:35 · answer #2 · answered by 01 Titan 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Deeply profound and profoundly deep
2006-07-22 13:30:46 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Evocative. I like it. Just clean up some of the spelling (That no-one is by ->are<-side) and you're good.
2006-07-22 13:14:36 · answer #4 · answered by mangobuyer 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Really like it would be interested to know where you live and what gave you inspiration to write this
2006-07-22 13:12:41 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's really good, a bit darker than what i usually read/write, but good none the less
2006-07-22 13:12:13 · answer #6 · answered by Austin 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Deep... Nice... loved the last four lines... keep it up!
2006-07-22 13:20:55 · answer #7 · answered by Afro Q 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it, very deep
2006-07-22 14:13:53 · answer #8 · answered by Ash888 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it... it's really unique... i haven't heard many good potetry peices like dat keep workin hard yur good at it......
2006-07-22 13:21:01 · answer #9 · answered by C~Rieezee 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i dont like any poetry sry
2006-07-22 13:29:56 · answer #10 · answered by george washintonn 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋