In your memory?

Question

I search you in every child I see;
I had made you a part of me.

you would have been 5 today;
you woud be doing things your way.

You didn't even live to 3;
your demise,I couldnt see.


I expected you live a decade;
but now your memories will never fade.

Heaven is where you dwell;
I wish I could say Farewell.

I am tired of being so brave;
I've always accepted what fate gave.

I want to be weak, cry and complain;
But no one understands my pain.

In my arms for once I want to hold you;
Dear child my love for you is so true.

your comment?

Answer 1

Anyone who has had a child can feel the pain and longing in your poem. The poem drew me in and held me there.
it was very good I liked it

Answer 2

A death of a child to his/her loving mother is one of the greatest punishment by law of karma.

Sometime back I read such a letter by another mother who lost her child. Then she tells. The death of my child become a boon to a lot of children of that age since she started going to orphanages and meet them regularly and started helping them to learn etc and also financially. Keep the image of your innocent cute child's face as door to see millions of other children who is dying for want of food, medicine etc all over the world....do somethiing for them....the image of your child in your mind will be always smiling.

And then, also think as your child got into a higher realm and she didn't have to undergo rest of the sufferings of this world. Be happy.

Answer 3

Dear Outlandish,

In a beautiful and expressive poem you expressed your happiness then and your loss now. I wish you very much new happiness. Never forget you small one.
Themo

Answer 4

You are so much like my mother,
My feelings for you are like no other.
You are a person I will treasure,
Always and Forever.

Poems you taught me to write,
You are the one who showed me the light.
I don't know what I would do,
If in my life, I didn't have you.

To me, you have been so influential,
Keeping things I tell you confidential.
You always seem to touch my soul,
Without you, I wouldn't feel whole.

Answer 5

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Answer 6

That,s a sad poem, But you did a good job

Answer 7

Very good, sad, brave...
sometimes it's better to cry, let it all out
but problem is when tears won't come
it's killing you isn't it???

Answer 8

its to long. i read first 2 lines and lost interest

Answer 9

this is a very good and sad poem, brought tears to my eyes..but i guess I'm a bit of a cry baby...did you write it or read it somewhere else?...either way thanks for sharing!

Answer 10

Makes me think of my kids and appreciate them.