Did you read me blog http://the-rent-is-due.blogspot.com?

Question

If so, what did you think? I need feed back so I can get better at this writing thing. Do I have the talent and potential to be a writer?

Answer 1

I checked out your blog and it looks interesting. I like that you are posting a story, that makes it really cool to read. The one thing I would suggest, especially if you want to get better at writing, is working on your grammar and punctuation. The heart is there, as corny as it sounds, but you just need a bit more periods and commas and such, you know? Other than that, I liked it.