Here we go again,
Me and my friend,
Arguing up a storm.
I yell at her,
And she yells back,
Our bond has been harshly torn.
We used to be so close,
Laughing and telling jokes,
But that all ended today.
Cause now when we look at eachother,
We see a person,
That we want to go away.
I call her on the phone,
To see how she was doing,
But the conversation didnt stay strong.
We end up in this fight,
Yelling about who is right,
But we know that we're both wrong.
The loudness of her words,
And the stregth of my voice,
Doesn't seem to mix well.
Because before we know,
We are calling it quits,
Wishing eachother a farewell.
We see eachother on the street,
But we never greet,
Just go on our way.
But we both know
Where our hearts want to go,
And we know where they want to stay.
It could've worked out,
If we would've talked instead of shout,
But for our actions, this is the cost,
I wish my friend good luck,
And she has my blessings,
...My love is now officially lost........
2006-07-21 10:29:24 · 9 answers · asked by ? 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
That is a really fantastic poem....it's based on your life right?
Well I do hope things get sorted out for you,
The way that you want them to.
Cause when we hold things back,
Only we survive to pick up the slack.
2 friends, now strangers, 2 empty left shells,
Where's the love, A former life they held.
I've had writers block FOREVER!! over 2 yrs, good luck!!
2006-07-21 10:44:49 · answer #1 · answered by anglo_audiophile 3 · 2⤊ 2⤋
hello are some poetry regulations which you look to have forget. like quite a few line could desire to start up with capital letters . a pal is sort of a flower, A rose to be applicable your poem, if we forget this mistake, is in simple terms beautiful
2017-01-03 04:05:31 · answer #2 · answered by anteby 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The story nice (sorry) but the rithem, I don't feal it like...
But that all ended today.
Cause now when we look at eachother,
should be like...
But that all ended today.
Now we can't look at each other the same way.
see.
2006-07-21 10:38:39 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice poem but sad. Call her man! Get her back and then you can write a new poem.
2006-07-21 10:34:06 · answer #4 · answered by Peace2All 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's a good poem, I can't right poems, if this really happened to you, I'm really sorry, and I hope you can work this out.
2006-07-21 10:33:45 · answer #5 · answered by qtrn2005 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
good for u man. Make a bold new start and learn from ur pervious mistakes.
2006-07-21 10:39:25 · answer #6 · answered by phantom 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ahh thats a good poem
2006-07-21 11:04:53 · answer #7 · answered by Marlen 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it means your a "dumbass". no matter what the arguement the girl is always right. go and apologize, and don't let it happen again.
2006-07-21 10:35:26 · answer #8 · answered by ? 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its beautiful but so sad......I know this feeling just too well :(
2006-07-21 10:35:02 · answer #9 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋