once upon a time...
there was a designer named hofaith....
there was a day... a girl name ude
came to him
and give him a lot of money just to
make a very beautiful GOWN...
so hofaith decided to make a gown
within two weeks...
and after two weeks...
the gown is already finish...
and ude already get it...
and wear it... and her reaction to
that gown was so questionable..
she say's { this gown was so ugly and
im not comfortable with it }...
and ude gave it back to hofaith..
and ude get the money that she gave to hofaith..
hofaith cry and cry just only because of that
criticism.. and after a while a mystery girl came to him
and wear the gown... and hofaith was very shock..
because the gown was so incredibly beautiful
when the mystery girl wear it...
the lesson in this story is:
{ lets compare the designer to god and the gown is
all of us that he made.. all of us can be beautiful if
we were comfortable in our physical appearance }...
2006-07-21 03:01:07 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Trivia
well that was a kinda cute little story, but a little hard to read because the names are so ridiculous and the grammar is pretty questionable. The overall message is nice though.
2006-07-21 03:07:53 · answer #1 · answered by cutie pie 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Your story has a nice message, but improve on your grammar.
2006-07-21 10:12:37 · answer #2 · answered by deostroll 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I really like this one. You just need to polish it up a little(spelling)
2006-07-21 10:33:01 · answer #3 · answered by missy 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Pretty good point, because only God can judge us anyway.
2006-07-21 10:08:33 · answer #4 · answered by peaches 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your point is good, but you could express it a little more clearly.
2006-07-21 10:05:48 · answer #5 · answered by Troy S 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very nice, a good message
2006-07-21 10:17:42 · answer #6 · answered by mightymite1957 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
this is too long to read...I'm bored
2006-07-21 10:04:44 · answer #7 · answered by Evil Wordmonger, LTD LOL 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋