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2006-07-21 01:14:59 · 5 answers · asked by freespiritedtaye 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Other - Entertainment
Very nice. Good meter and tone. Are you trying to be a poet? Excuse me poetess.
2006-07-21 01:18:28 · answer #1 · answered by mikeae 6 · 2⤊ 1⤋
I assume u mean the poem "School days".
Frankly it needs some polishing. Verse, Rhyme, Imagery, Metaphors and similes are some of the things to consider.
2006-07-21 08:36:54 · answer #2 · answered by Lee 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
pretty good=P but i'm not a poet. its a decent poem not like roses are red, violets are blue=P but pretty good. just kidding its better.
2006-07-21 08:19:20 · answer #3 · answered by Spectator 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very nice indeed. l think you should become a poet
2006-07-21 08:22:07 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it
2006-07-21 08:39:19 · answer #5 · answered by mizz_adi-2-de 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋