Birdy birdy in the snow
broke it's wing and could not go
I gave the birdy water and bread
And then I smashed it's little head.
OR
Pointy birds all pointy pointy
Anoint my head Anointy-nointy.
2006-07-21 00:23:55 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Social Science ➔ Psychology
You know what. When I usually see people's poetry on this site it ALL stinks. I have NEVER seen a decent poem on this site and just wish to God people would stop posting their dreadful efforts on here.
However.
You know what. I GENUINELY love both of your poems. Seriously, I do.
Thank God someone with a real talent and sense of absurdism and irony has posted something.
Well done my friend. If I lived anywhere near you, I'd buy you a pint.
But the first one is the best.
2006-07-21 01:55:27 · answer #1 · answered by durulz2000 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Both r really funny but i like the first one because the last line is all it takes to make people laugh!!!!!
2006-07-21 09:02:08 · answer #2 · answered by akar 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
none of the above, sorry.
Here are some good poetry websites you might want to try:
http://www.poetry.com
http://www.lovepoetry.com
http://www.poetryarchive.org/poetryarchive/home.do
Here's a magnetic poetry website, it's kind of cute:
http://www.magneticpoetry.com/magnet/
2006-07-21 07:30:57 · answer #3 · answered by dmc81076 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
if it makes you happy :both of them///
2006-07-21 07:34:07 · answer #4 · answered by melin 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
neither
2006-07-21 07:25:07 · answer #5 · answered by ~•over the moon•~ 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ooh god .... are you serious?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2006-07-21 08:09:35 · answer #6 · answered by prince_of_mess 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋