did u read this story?
http://fairyfeather.blogspot.com/
hows it?? person who gives a long review will get 10 points.
2006-07-20 18:44:15 · 8 answers · asked by fayaz 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Other - Entertainment
Its my true story. but i dont want all positive reviews. i dont know whether i succeeded in putting all my feelings in words. so u can be frank while giving comments.
2006-07-20 18:59:22 · update #1
It's a great story, It makes me want to cry.
I think you have a really great talent on writing.
your story should been have been in the chicken soup soul.
http://www.chickensoup.com/
2006-07-20 23:04:46 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋
The story was good, but I am confused if it was a story, or if it was real.
However, the story kinda leaves the reader hanging because the reader has to fill the implication and meaning between the writers words. Did "My Angel" really care for the guy? If she did why did she lie? Was she trying to spare the feelings of someone that she never met face to face? What happened to the guy?? Where did they bury the girl? Did the mom tell the guy that she died for sure instead of giving him a t-shirt because it was her last wish? Maybe she left to college? Maybe she just wanted an easy way out.
2006-07-21 02:05:22 · answer #2 · answered by jonzmom1 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I thought it was very touching and it sure sounds real to me!
I have been emailing with an old love from another country, and I do so worry if I don't hear from him for a day or two. Since I am 62 and nothing in this life is a sure thing, I have left instructions with my granddaughter to em my old love in case something happens to me.
Your story was easy to read and follow. It kept me wanting to read more and find out what the outcome was.
2006-07-21 01:57:02 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its a nicely written story, though it has got its share of flaws.
But if you are not a professional writer they could be excused.
I somehow felt that the last two paragraphs were not as gripping as the first two.
All in all its still a good one.
2006-07-21 02:19:21 · answer #4 · answered by YAMAHA 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That story will surely haunts me for years to come! Long enough for you?
2006-07-21 01:56:16 · answer #5 · answered by cellm8te 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sucks .. really ... un original sounded like u read whole bunch of romance stories that u liked and wrote what u felt
2006-07-21 02:07:48 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think its a sweet romantic but really sad story
and i think they person that wrote it is talented
its so full of emotional and detail and makes you feel what he is feeling
2006-07-21 01:51:53 · answer #7 · answered by crystal h 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I don't trust you. Something's probably going to jump out and scare the crap out of me.
2006-07-21 01:47:44 · answer #8 · answered by Patty Pooh Pooh Pie 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋