This year class of students was one I will never forget. People you will meet in your life will change for better or worse. No matter who you are or what class you were you will meet this wonderful class and they will touch your heart and soul. Now that they graduacted they will have many hard choices to make about life. Do not feel sad for them, help them celebrate this chapter in life with them. Class of 2006
2006-07-20 17:03:50 · 20 answers · asked by maccie211 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
It's true. Are you part of the class of '06? Cuz I am.
It's sweet. It's not as free flowing as excellent poetry, but it's all right. It doesn't all join and go together smoothly (however, I'm no expert), but it tells the truth and shows how you feel.
Keep on writing and thinking. A good teacher once told me that writing is simply thinking. I think that's what got me into writing and appreciating poetry and stuff.
2006-07-20 17:11:18 · answer #1 · answered by Schnickle 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It does not sound like a poem. But if it is for say "Your schools graduation speech" then is ok. You should tho' go over it and review it. There are things that need rephrasing and grammar checks. But is real nice. Good Job!
2006-07-21 00:11:46 · answer #2 · answered by JUST ME 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it is very encouraging and insightful. I would Change the year and pass it along for 2007. Very good keep up the great work.
2006-07-21 00:11:14 · answer #3 · answered by Katherine C 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you used the word class to much
sounds like the typical speech that is always said
you could make it better with some editing
good luck
2006-07-21 00:12:07 · answer #4 · answered by miscillia 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I write poetry, and agreed it doesent always have to rhyme e.g. the Psalms are poetry and they dont rhyme, but I think it not really a poem. More of a tribute I think.
2006-07-21 00:08:52 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i really dont like it. you didnt get personal, just sounded really cliche-ish.
my suggestions, after the first sentace give literal examples to personalize it a little more, tell me why you will never forget about these people, feel me?
2006-07-21 00:08:54 · answer #6 · answered by truthhurts 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Me being a poetry writer i'd say it's like a Graduation speech..... But gud that u can write....thatz gud..gud lck in college
2006-07-21 00:08:21 · answer #7 · answered by ♫ I kno' u see it!♫ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds like something you would write in a yearbook. Very good.
2006-07-21 00:08:45 · answer #8 · answered by Miss G 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yeah, I agree. It's good but a little redundant.
2006-07-21 00:11:18 · answer #9 · answered by WhateverHappened2MyLunchbox? 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I don't think I'd call it a poem. Maybe a tribute?
2006-07-21 00:06:35 · answer #10 · answered by Ricky 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋